All Comments on 'Jill and Bethany Ch. 02'

Read both chapters just an AWESOME sexual love,romance and sex story . Happy to say I'm a GAY male and only wish more GAY male stories were written as well as this story was, instead of just "lets get to the sex". I'm sure there is such love and romance amomg GAY men also, but it it not written.or I have not seen any. Again this is an AWESOME story of LESBIAN love and SEX. hopefully I will read a similsr story about GAY male Love, Romance and Sex

Mmmmm... a luscious sequel to a steamy gem of a story. Please do continue this one - I'd love to see mother and daughter explore one another in Chapter Three!

Brilliantly done - please bring on some more !

One of the best on Lit since a long time. Hope there is a sequel.

This was a very well written story and I think that there is room for at least one more chapter where Jill becomes a more active participant.

Whether you continue this story or not, keep writing.

After reading this author's four stories here, it is a shame there haven't been more. The later two continued stories show great promise. Perhaps the author turned to a more profitable widely published and edited type of literature.

Thoroughly enjoyed the second chapter in this series. I love how sweet and innocent Beth is. I love the attention to detail, you've wrote something very special. I would like to see a part three in which we get to see Beth enjoying Becca's sexy mature body as well as her Mum's. I think you have done well to capture the awakening of the sexual side of Beth. And how special it is for a younger girl to have lost her virginity to an older woman who truly enjoys her.

Would love to read more in this story, beyond Bethany's initiation into girl/girl.

Wonderful story, characters, and plot development. I would love to read more about Becca, Jill and Bethany. You are an excellent writer!