All Comments on 'The End of a Very Bad Week'

I found the dramas lacking as well as the ending. Did not seem believable.

The plotline seemed like it would be interesting, but a bad week isn't just someone borrowing your stuff or missing a lunch break - way overdramatic. 2) she had a boyfriend, but that didn't even get noticed by the guy 3) why would she decide to go back with him, for him buying her a coffee? Completely unrealistic and underdeveloped.

"Their cell phone confrontation made any episode of The Hills look like the original Beverly Hills 90210."

????? The only way that sentence would make sense is if they were on the hills. And they're not.

What a messed up story from the start - wonder what kind of STD she has now to not just mess up her week but her life, and I guess she really liked her boyfriend. This would be the kind of woman that we all run into and they all wonder why we call them xxxxxx's !!!

I gather that the word "plausible" is not something important to your writing. It COULD have been a good story......

-- KK in Texas

The basic plot line was fine but then you went into an unbelievable series of minor frustrations culminating in her going home with a perfect stranger, who draws a bath for her then strips her...... Give me a break! Who would even consider these events without some character development. Put yourself in her place. Is this a reasonable scenario?

The story was good and then had a good plot line to it. But it was all a lot of fantasy for this woman to find a guy like him. I love the find a woman like him it would do things for me. Keep writing