by Angel497
This is a nice, well written story. The story line is believable and the characters sound like people I would like to meet. This is a good read!!
I think there could have been more build up to the actual sex by having them start with other foreplay activities, but other than that, it was well written. Good job.
just another story posted by a hack that can't finish what they start. this would have been better off unposted since half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.
You have to be a real piece of shit to post anonymous trash talk on a story. If you have substantive, constructive criticism, offer it. If you just want to trash someone who has been kind enough to offer you a story to read, you're worthless. I enjoyed the story, and I'm glad to see that there are several more installments.
Started out good then completely shit in its own mouth bringing in foot fetish trash