- Erotic Couplings
- Fishing Buddies
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All Comments on 'Fishing Buddies'
by m_storyman_x
- 13 Comments
Pirate Tregarealmost 15 years agoOops, I mean "credible." As in the set up actually makes the events seem plausible. At first I was thinking she seemed to accede awfully easily, but her revelation of catching him beating off previously establishes a logical reason for it. Well done!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agotook it hook, line and sinker. ;-) Now I'd like to see more of that.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI presume the "mirages" in the ninth paragraph from the end of the story was "meant" to be a description of their marriages and not Freudian.
Anonymousover 13 years agoi have to agree. your stories would be about 10x better if you checked your spelling and grammar (mirages, defiantly, other typos).
Anonymousover 12 years agoAlthough I also agree that your story would have been more enjoyable if there were no spelling errors, I think everyone's being a bit harsh. I'm sure you just got a bit distracted while you were writing this very sexy story and overlooked a few things... :)
jkthekatover 11 years agoI can attest that there are really women out there like this!
Just not enough....
jackt
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSeriously, Dude??
You have ALREADY done everything necessary to ruin your marriage(s)
You have already lied to your wife and are getting ready to have sex with some other woman
If this was in "Loving Wives" and the sexes were reversed, your character would be getting soundly ripped
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWell done. Nice twist with the fishing idea. Anyone who doesn't like your style should remind themselves that this is fantasy-not real life. Duh.
oldtwitalmost 7 years agoOh yes another good read lots of good old hard sex, well paced and the descriptions of everything was well done,
Anonymousover 4 years agoand just what one would expect from you.
Passion and well done!
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