by Gimli37
you made the brother into a real pussy whipped asshole no guy would act like that when she started to party after the parents left he would stay at a friends when he came home early and saw a car in the drive he would either make a lot of noise so she knew he was home or just drive by and visit friends keep it realistic and believable please
I agree with the previous comment, you really messed the story up big time. It's bad enough you're writing about incest but you can't even write a good story.
totaly ruins the story when the sister is fucking 2 guys.
The previous commenters are fucking idiots. The story is great & the encounter with the two guys from the beginning helps to provide background. Much better than just the bro&sis getting it on from the get-go. Love the story too. Definitely made me cum ^_
One of my favorites and I've read a lot of stories here. Big sister and a touch of bondage make it into one of my fantasies.
loved it one of my favorites,and with 3 older sisters of my own no bloody wonder
keep doing the good work
You made me hot as hell by considering myself as the slutty Brian.
Good story
one of my favorites incest stories
wishing myself bieng Brian
Part one was getting hotter and we went into part two and you crash and burned