All Comments on 'Come On In'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I had a clue with, "...ever so often."

Then after three screens I discovered this was written in first person/second person form and I bailed out. An idiot for an author.

Cthulhu1138Cthulhu1138over 6 years ago
Would love a show of mine own

Love the story!

Sexy and riveting, such a lovely fantasy.

DragonSlayerErrantDragonSlayerErrantalmost 6 years ago
Breathtaking

A fine fantasy that could easily become a favourite!

Thanks for sharing.

jessicaravenjessicaraven13 days ago

Oh my, what a hot story! Certainly got this reader aroused!

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