All Comments on 'Mrs. Thompson Gives Me My First BJ'
by squarejohn
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI too have sweet memories of an "older" woman. Every young man should have a talented teacher. I'd like to say thank you to Mrs. Burke.
LuckyBastard13about 14 years agoThat was a great story, very believable. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more of your work. Thanks again!
Donatienabout 14 years agoI pity those guys who have not had the pleasure of sampling the sensuous pleasures that only an experienced woman can provide. Thanks, squarejohn, for this vivid description of outstanding bliss.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoA few minor errors for example - "I want you just as you are she said," almost whispering.
The quotes are misplaced - should be: "I want you just as you are" she said, almost whispering.
I understand wankers don't care about this and will give a high score but unfortunately you have to deal with English majors reading your stories so for higher scores you need to consider an editor.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoread it with my with in bed , bloody good read wank ,bj ! thanks
thebug37almost 9 years agoLooking forward like I'm certain others are doing the same. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 6 years agoGreat story! I would have been in heaven if it was my own experience!
