All Comments on 'A Hunter's World Ch. 01'

I follow with bated breath!

U have a great way to write a soul wrenching part without trying so hard to emphasize it or turn this beautiful story into a sappy one. Two thumbs up.

Even the most zealous practitioners of alchemy never suggested that you could make gold of 24 carrots. Can you think of a single good reason to read anything after your unfortunate first sentence?