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Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 15

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by Anonymous

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by Powertool7908/31/10

these submissons could be...

a little longer

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by gsmoke1308/31/10

good..BUT

..the continuity is suffering because of the abruptness of the story length. There is almost no flow

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by Anonymous08/31/10

Agree

It would have more continuity if the chapters were a bit longer. In fact, somehow I missed 13 & 14 and only realized it when I was completely lost starting chapter 15. However, some of the dialog is great and I like the story and the perspective of the amazingly hot female, who is out of her league.

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by bruce2208/31/10

Slow but sure

She is now indentifying him with her orgasms, she is lost!

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by fartfalcon08/31/10

The additions to this story are so awesome. I'm so glad you decided to start it up again!

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by m48gunner09/01/10

Fun

Fun Story, Thanks!

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by lormahoykyd200710/08/10

Great.

I thought the last line was beautiful.

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by Anonymous09/14/15

I really hate ur 1 pg per chapter

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