by shaunreagh
And what a mischievous time to break off!
Encore, as they say, or rather, Continuez!
People who haven't the courage to sign in an comment but criticise from behind the veil of anonymity are the lowest kind of trash. Don't pay any attention to their bile.
It's your story. Tell it anyway you want.
Brilliant, wonderful control and development.
The only improvement would be a follow up.
You MUST continue this! Has a GREAT beginning for a nice erotic series... going anywhere you want to take it...he gets girl...then wife - either - cathes them and gets involved...then both wives...maybe his cucks him...then Cindy meets and seduces his daughter...the opps are unlimited!
Great story, you must give us the next part of this one.
Really good.
keep up the great work.
It would be of great pleasure if a second part could be added. Would be extremely grateful, many young women would be ......
This story is so engrossing, it truly had me in that room holding that lovely young lady.
great story!
Thanks, for a wonderful read.
That was amazing!
We would love to see the next chapter.
One hand tweaking a taught nipple, the other slipping a finger into a wet fresh pussy.
A drooling hard-on resting in between her tight ass cheeks.
My answer "Yes, I'd love it either way".
Please.
I know you want us to make our own ending, but you tell the story so well.
waiting for the next chapter.
Humor and sexual tension. I have never laughed at a lite erotica story. Until now. Should be a screen play writer.
An excellent story: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0)! Bravissimo! Very very erotic.
As regards the young 18 year old guest,
I rated her ❤❤❤❤❤+ (5.5 or 110%)!