All Comments on 'Do You Remember?'

by rwsteward

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW!

Title of the comment says it all. WOW! BRAVO!

PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
Wonderful

Well done, and so sweet. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Beautiful

I have been married for 40 years and couldn't have expressed love any better than you did. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful

A beautiful story and well written. Their love shines through it. Thank you.

oldwayneoldwayneover 13 years ago
What a beautiful story!

With tears in these old eyes and a big, big lump in my throat, I can only say thank you for your story. It truly touched my heart.

Ghost_247Ghost_247over 13 years ago
That was so bittersweet

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wonderful!!!!

What a beautiful way to describe a love story!!!!!!!

Am in tears now!!!

Please keep up the good work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I really liked this. It's a beautiful piece and I'm glad you talked about organ donation. (My best friend just got a new heart and lungs).

A couple points about an organ donor - if she was being prepped for harvesting, her hand would still be warm because they don't pull the life support until the vital organs are harvested. If she 'died instantly', it's unlikely she would be able to be a donor unless they got her heart beating in the field and she came into the ER brain dead. Minor detail but thought I'd note it.

Reindeer58Reindeer58over 13 years ago
Awesome

One of the best written romance stories I've ever read. It's either written from personal experience or about a dear friend's. Got my tears, my friend. Keep up the good, thoughtful, real-life work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I have tears in my eyes...

Really, I do. You are, by far, one of the best writers at Literotica. Please, keep writing. Looking forward to more brilliance from you. :) Take care.

farthmaulfarthmaulabout 12 years ago

You should write a follow up since the way the story ends is so sad. What happens to Henry? Does he find another love?

MrVdogMrVdogabout 12 years ago
One of the very best

I think so, anyway.

cocputcocputabout 12 years ago
Touching

The story meant a lot to me. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
let us know in advance

please let us know in advance that the story is gonna end as tragic... I was all smiles a moment... And then had tears in another....

Soo beautiful story... With such a sad end.... Loved it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fine job

Great story and you did a nice job of controlling our emotions, bringing them to the surface just at the very end.

Thank you for writing this. I hope to continue to read your stories.

5***** from me.

Regards,

-Pultoy

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
REMBERANCE OF THE PAST

even though it;s really late in time, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WHOA!

The imagery and emotions of the story were so vivid i was in tears by the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Beautiful. Very well though and written. Once again, beautiful.

MaddieKimMaddieKimabout 11 years ago
As always

a beautiful story.

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
What A Beautiful Story.*****

Thanks for sharing.

Sam37Sam37over 10 years ago
Oh. My. Goodness.

This is an exceptional story.

Wow.

This moved me deeply. I knew when she went into the woods that she was gone, but the ending still pushed me off the emotional cliff.

Very well done.

Sam37Sam37over 10 years ago
Walking Her Home

Is a song by Mark Schultz in the same vein as this story. It brings a smile to my face and tears to my eyes each time I hear it.

Check it out.

spud65spud65almost 10 years ago
Owwwwww

That really hurt. Great story though kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
except

wonderful story except for the last part.Brings back memories.

Taffbanjo2013Taffbanjo2013about 9 years ago
Beautiful

One of the loveliest stories I've read anywhere.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
touching

you do know how touch a chord in someones heart. A beautiful story of the days gone by. hats off

rlh100rlh100about 9 years ago
Magical marriages

My parents had a magical marriage like this. They were still deeply in love when they passed away. 63 years.

calgarycamperscalgarycampersabout 9 years ago
still rips my heart out

Great story told in a great way

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 9 years ago
Yes, I remember

Except for the ending, I saw a replay of my wife and I exploring sex in the story. You've done a great job of capturing teenage and married young love. Oh, to relive those days again!

Thanks for the memories, as Bob Hope used to say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
HECK OF A STORY

Just finished reading one of this genre's best stories. Thank you for the time well spent reading this gem.

trigudistrigudisover 8 years ago
Emotionally searing...

Terrific story, guy. I'm not ashamed to admit I burst into tears when it became obvious that Helen was gone.

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
wow

that was a powerful love story.

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The Ramblers back in that era

Had the option of fold down front seat backs which made up a very nice bed. (Thanks Dad.)

t8ntliklyt8ntliklyover 6 years ago
Speachless

I just read your Wyoming story and thought I would read some others. I'm totally speechless. A remembrance of / with a loved one like no other

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
10 stars

True love from beginning to end

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I donโ€™t like romance stories that end in death.

flarebel2327flarebel2327over 5 years ago
remembering

takes me back all most 8 yrs ago come March 31st 2011 when my wife passed. still talk to her every night . still can look back in my mind the first time I ever saw her the great legs, fine looking behind & the wavy blond hair. brings tears to my eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wetness on my cheek

Is what I am feeling

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago
Beautiful!

Bittersweet, beautiful story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh - nice one !

Bloody good story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful but heart wrenching. Very well written and a great format. 5*s.

Cal59Cal59over 2 years ago

Got me and got to me, thanks

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 2 years ago
Wonderfully , beautifully sad

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Damn you. you made me cry in front of my wife. Fantastic writing.

OldmantruckerOldmantrucker9 months ago

Why?? I Still hurt

OldmantruckerOldmantrucker8 months ago

๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Doesn't make much difference. Your not here anymore. You Were Very good.. still are.. your just not here.. thks for your storys.. hope your well ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘

woodrangewoodrange7 months ago

WOW. awesome. thank you

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