All Comments on 'Darkroom - Monday'
by Ambidentrous
- 30 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow where have you been? Please write more chapter the week has just begun so at least 4 more and a finale.
Anonymousover 13 years agoDelicious build-up....it was like 3 D sexuality....the couple, the boys listening and the girls listening....I bet ALL were hard or wet.... can't wait for "Tuesday"!!
Anonymousover 13 years agoloved it, bery erotic, took me to the center, also took me to climax
Anonymousover 13 years agoI can't wait for the rest of the week and if they get to see them in the "light"
Anonymousover 13 years agoVery nice story. Very original and new concept which was refreshing. I especially liked how you used the dialogue to drive and tell the story.
Look forward to the next episode and hope you'll continue it, as it has good potential.
sleeplessgurlover 13 years agoI really enjoyed your story. Well written. Original idea. Very hot. I'm looking forward to the rest of the week! ;-)
Anonymousover 13 years agoYour story TOTALLY sucked me in. Very well thought out and I enjoyed your writing style immensely. I very much hope you'll see fit to finish out the week. I've begun to be interested in your characters :-)
Anonymousover 13 years agoOne of the best new stories I've found in here in a long time! I'll be eagerly anticipating more. Loved your originality. It's nice to see something that hasn't already been done a time or two before.
Anonymousover 13 years agoCan you give any time table for at least Tuesday to Friday installments and any indication if you want to take this beyound the dark room
Ambidentrousover 13 years agoAuthorThanks for the comments. They've definitely provided a powerful incentive to keep going. I'm not committing to a timetable, but I can tell you that Tuesday has been submitted already and I'm at work on Wednesday. In some ways I'm as curious to see how this turns out as you are.
Nemlepover 13 years agoI like this very much ... a different approach and great story telling.
Paaskonijnalmost 13 years agoAlthough I know the other days of the week are already out, this impressed me enough to already want to comment on the first chapter.
This is so profoundly erotic, I am amazed by how well it is written. Very well thought out and the pace is perfect. The theme is not one I am usually drawn to, but this is possibly the best beginning of a Literotica story I have read!
wuz2blualmost 12 years agoWonderful story! You are a VERY good writer, and your sense of suspense and what to tell and--more importantly--what to leave to the readers' imagination is brilliant! Looking forward very much to reading the further adventures of this group...and whatever else you decide to write! Thank you!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSERIOUSLY CONTINUE THIS!!!!!!!! i came like four times. great plot and cant wait for tuesday
Anonymousabout 10 years agoVery original, well written story. Enjoyed the build up, the suspense of what might (or might not) happen, and the sex act itself was pretty hot! Look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Blueseas2almost 8 years agoIntriguing approach. Drew me into the story.
Enjoy your gift... We do.
Anonymous4 months agoHow did she collect her clothes in a pitch black room when coming in from a side room, how did they make the side room in the first place. Other than that.. Very Good
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