All Comments on 'Serving Girl and Sunday Sermon'

Such a great series. I really enjoy your writing. You are a great writer. Can't wait for more!

I'm really enjoying this story.. hope you continue it. It is so much fun fantasizing what can be done with absolute power and a willing victim !

More of the religious theme. Please.

Enjoyed the first chapter better but as this was only a short piece am looking forward to the next chapter so keep it up.

I just submitted Pt. 2 and if approved it should be posted maybe by this weekend.

Thank you so very much for your comments and encouragement. It is a handsome pay indeed when a reader will take a moment to say thank you and perhaps even a "you suck!" is some form of feedback, although imprecise. I must admit I'm glad that, so far, I have not had a comment as imprecise as "you suck!"

Nice pace to your writing. Your way of imparting the background of characters through the story itself, as opposed to isolating that information in introductory paragraphs, was a nice way to start enjoying your story line right away. It's also a technique that pulls readers into the scenes. Thank you for a brief but really good read.

I enjoyed it thanks.