All Comments on 'Different Kinds of Heat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow!!!

You have a real talent. Absolutely no criticism!!!

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 7 years ago
Oh my goodness...

You've got an amazing little sleeper here...

It's too bad more people haven't commented on it...

And you've great potential for a part two... Weeks later, after his ankle has healed...? Him intentionally stalking her (not really meant in the creepy way) and "catching her" in the basement... Though it would be nice if he remembers to bring towels...?

zingzingzingbahzingzingzingbahover 7 years ago
Nice!

quality stuff - very well written! great story.

loved it!

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 7 years ago
Interesting thoughts for me....

On the one hand, I'm glad I found this story... And in this case actually ran into it AGAIN... Because it was definitely with rereading...

On the other hand, I'm still disappointed that it hadn't gotten the type of exposure it deserves...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Have read this story a few times now. It's a really good one. Would love to see a follow up. I agree that this story and author deserve more recognition.

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