All Comments on 'Hallelujah Ch. 01'

It really seems like you have spent some time in a recording studio. Gripping read; I heard Leonard Cohen to singing in the background as I read the story. I already dislike his almost wife and I haven't met her yet.

darn great so far, descriptions, pacing, mood, setting, everything clicks

Describing any scene is what i like in your writings, keep it up, dont go for number of comments, You are better than most of the writers here on lit, this one is littel confusing(about ages) but still i am liking is and looking forward to it.

Thankfully the quality of this author's work transcends the inane scribblings of a demented Brit-hating closet cuckold commenting about shit he obviously knows nothing about: writing.

The home of gutless faggots and pedophiles. I agree with anon from 08/12 100% !

Very well written and full of detail. I am definitely intrigued and eager to see where this leads. Five stars.

"It's not a model's scrawny ass...it's a woman's, and that's fantastic."

Still five stars. People are missing out.

Great writing as usual. Not sure how I missed this one, but it looks like a winner.

This questionnaire are more sophisticated than just asking "have you cheated". They ask if you have had penetrative sex with another partner outside your marriage without your spouse's consent or knowledge. Since the study is anonymous and confidential regarding identity, people generally tell the truth when given the anonymous opportunity. Guilty pleasure?

The frequency of extramarital affairs for both sexes has also been confirmed with correlation to lie detector tests. Men have an extramarital affair more often (29% of married men by their 50s at leat once vs 19% of married women by their 50s) but women have longer affairs on average (6 months vs 2 months). When it comes to infidelities of any kind (including 2nd base, dirty dancing, passionate kissing, handjobs, etc) for exclusive relationships of any kind (married, engaged, exclusive dating) then the numbers converge to 58% for men and 54% for women.

The truly harrowing numbers are would they cheat on their spouse if they had a 100% guarantee that they would not be found out, then married men clock in at 75% and married women at 67%. That is terrifying!!