All Comments on 'A Tale Of Many Mistakes Ch. 05'

Keep it up!!! Five Stars!!!!!

In my comment at the end of Ch. 04, I indicated my hope this would not be a RAAC (reconciliation at all costs) ending. It is now beginning to look in fact as if that very event is looming ahead. My main critique of this part is that it was really too short. Nothing much happened other than Amy's wedding, and even that was minimally developed. I have trouble understanding why he and Eileen would be seated together. Amy surely would want to avoid conflicts at her own wedding reception, and she (and her new husband) would control the seating arrangements. It just seems a bit late for this divorced couple to be getting back together, but the last two paragraphs seem to indicate RAAC is coming . . .

I like the way you are moving, he seems to be getting a handle on his life. I don't have the problem some do with a possible reconciliation.....I don't excuse the behavior, but no one is perfect! I do think that whether reconciled or not he needs to get a grip on his life, on his anger.

I have no issue with a reconciliation, if that is the direction you choose to go, so long as it fits the story and characters. So often, either reconciliation or revenge simply do not feel like they flow from the characters or the story line. You have done a good job of being consistent with your characters, yet leaving several paths a possibility. Well done.

Serious temper issues and drinks too much. Your male lead needs to get a life and get himself under control. His wife is stupid if she takes him back with his anger management issues.

I think everyone needs to be reminded that the bitch cheated on him for a year and a half. I do not know where this story is going, but how many people in this world could forgive that? I hope this guy isn't one of the fucked up few. If he does I do not think it will fit what has been laid out here.

I am positive this is where you are going. I could forgive a person that cheated on me once, however, not for a year. As the saying goes, "once a cheater always a cheater". Also, you have not mentioned what Eileen has been doing since the divorce.

His reaction is actually true to life in my experience. When my marriage (read marriages) broke up, I never had a bad time with my ex (s), but I've got two friends who did and they reacted exactly like this guy. Did they get back together? Well one did and one didn't, and now a good few years later, they both seem content. Horses for courses as they say. Don't take too long to put us out of our misery please.

but does that have to be bad? She shit all over him, true. How has her life been going since? Would he be happier with her or without her? The writer will tell us. No two men, or people, are alike and some can forgive what others cannot. It looks like he will have a surprise date with his wife and the results will be monumental. A chapter should tell a small part of the story and have a logical end. This chapter just stopped. It is considerate that the story is all posted and coming our way soon. Thanks!

I am not a big fan of either character because of the bad choices that they made, but they feel real to me. I love the story. Please make sure that you tell us what is happening with the wife. At this point, while she is suffering, she is also probably coming to grips with being alone and would not take his abuse much longer.

Oh come on.. One damn page and just how many chapters are we going to have of this. It's a good read just don't make it stale by thinking you can milk this story forever.

This chapter was too short, and solved nobody's problems, either get them back together or end it.

The author is due a thank you; I'm enjoying this tale. I agree with others, it appears that the protagonist is heading toward reconciliation with the ex-wife, but why is that so bad. It's not as if he's having a ball being single, he's obviously still in love with her. Getting over what she's done to him is the difficult part, over a period of a year and a half. And even if they do reconcile, just imagine the angst he's going to go through after the reconciliation. The lack of trust, the jealousy, the recriminations; it ain't gonna to be pretty. The poor guy is going to be screwed either way - living alone in misery or being back together with a women who screwed him over so badly. This is a tale with no happy ending, however it goes.

Everyone thinks they will get back together. But I am not sure. In chapter 1, he says he has been divorced for 5 years. At this point it has been almost 3. So if they get back together soon, it will not last long. The way the first chapter was looking, it did not seem like it would pick up from there ether.

The title of this piece indicates a story told in five parts. Are we to assume that this one page is the conclusion? This story has been well written and well paced, but really, a single page this late in the story is far too terse for my tastes. At least whet my appetite for another chapter. Hopefully there will be one?

I love this story but your doling it out so slowly is torture. While not a writer myself, I appreciate the time it takes to write a story, get it editted and then posted but when you need your fix, empathy with the process does little to ease the pain.

If my understanding of the submission process is right, the 2 last chapters, 6 and 7 (including the epilogue) should be out winthin the next 2 or 3 days.

Yes this chapter is short. It seemed longer in my word processing. The other chapters won't be as short but not much longer.

Likegoodwine

Agree with Hardaysknight. No one who faces this type of situation will know their reaction until it happens. Some can forgive and some cannot. That's life. Good read so far author, doesn't matter how short your chapters, at least you continue at a reasonable pace. Thanks for the entertainment. ML

While it may be a necessary for the sake of the story for your male character to carry his emotional baggage forward for an extended period, in real life, those that do so are doing nothing more than shortening their lives by introducing unnecessary stress to their bodies. Forgive and forget, or reconcile. Do one or the other and live longer. It doesn't make for good fiction, but...

It was realistic in that after a divorce from a long marriage , you have to start sweeping the old ghosts out of your mental closet before you can make yourself or anybody else happy again . It doesn't happen over night .

I have always favored reconciliation over torch-the-bitch endings, but the reconciliation has to fit.

She cheated on him for a year and a half, that indicates her tears are for getting caught, not for what she did. You can't live with a person who disrespects you like that, and you can't live with a person when you can't trust that person only wants what's best for you. Love without trust and respect is nothing but heartache.

It's difficult getting over 20+ years of marriage and it will take a looong time before he is completely healed -- if that ever happens. I understand his anger and his resentment of his ex, I do however think he's weak for succumbing to time and again and doing those stupid things he does.

Either he loves her or he doesn't. The time for petty BS should be over. Go on with life or remarry her! Enough is enough!

Despite what the wife did. In fact because of what she did I truly think she is sorry. And as others have said I have never walked in a persons shoes that has found out their life partner has cheated on them. I truly do not know exactly how I would react. I would think the first reaction was to lash out. Hurt my life partner as much at she hurt me. The next reaction would be to hurt the lover. I don't care how big he is or how high in status he was he would know how hurt I was. Now once I had got all that out of my system I would try and live again. I would do my hardest to forget my ex-life partner.

BUT if I still loved my partner and if I truly thought that she had shown true regret and remorse and guilt for what she did. I would slowly over time see how her life is. If I had kids I would be part of thier life. If that meant talking to an ex-wife? then so be it. Would I want to be 'friends' with the ex-wife? possibly. Would I ever think about sexual contact with the ex-wife? Only when it is absolutely clear that we will never get married. And that she is tested and totally clear of any infections. Then and only then would I be part of my ex-wife's life.

However I have NEVER been there. My wife has never cheated on me and I have never cheated on her. So my view at this point in time is let them start dating again, let them see how far they go. Can he trust her? unlikely, can he forgive her, maybe. Can he ever forget what she has done. Never is my answer.

If they can get over those mountains, then and only then should they become a couple once more. I would doubt very much if I coudl do any of these things.

Thank you for the story, yes this chapter was short, but it's still a good read.

Regards

AW

after 3 years he is STILL writing nasty postcards? how pathetic!!! As I said in chapter 4 feedback....the SOLE reason WHY the author is making him so awful is to justify reconcilation at all cost.

this is Just a plot folks

If he takes her back, it's going to be another mistake.

You have managed to take a character that many could identify with (the husband) and turn him into someone few would want to know. Oddly, the cheating W is turning out to be a better human being. I hope this was your intention, otherwise you have messed up this story big time.

His hate and bitterness used to be understandable, now it's just like "get over it already"! Sending the postcard will make some cheer, but it just makes him look like a douche. And in this case Mary had every right to chew out her father. We get that she cheated. We get that she is sorry. But those juvenile stunts are past their expiration date. The man can't even put on a civil facade at his daughter's wedding. He didn't have to act like nothing had changed but that had to have been one awkward wedding.

And Tammy must be the STUPIDEST woman on the planet. Even if she didn't think Cindy's marriage was "on" again she should have at least had the sense to see if the woman was divorced.

every once in awhile people FINALLY choose to forgive rather than let bitterness control life. I am not an author. that said, i will share my opinion and you will not overestimate its potential value lol:-).

The character hit HIS rock bottom with his drinking. Building and moving into cabin are obvious signs he himself has grown weary of wallowing in his misery. He truly loved her. He will always love the memories. Since he is fictional anything is possible. He can man up. tell his adult children that he loved raising them with their wonderful mother. he loved it!!! tell them he loves each memory. how wonderful the love was! ask forgiveness for making them choose. and for turning to them for sympathy. Forgive the ex. Feel compassion for her. DO NOT RECONCILE UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCE. DO NOT SPEND ANY MORE TIME BLAMING HER FOR HIS EMOTIONAL STATE. SHE NO LONGER CONTROLS HIS HEART. HE IS A FREE MAN WITH A MORAL CODE HE WANTS TO LIVE BY. Yeah he wallowed. a little too long?? maybe he really dealt with all his emotions. He can live in his own skin instead of just existing. true recovery is time consuming and tedious.

one more thing maybe two more. His ex ought to only enter his personal thoughts MAYBE EVEN SAD MOMENT OF REFLECTING ON WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN when events like birth of grandchild arise NO MORE ANGER. holidays should be filled with conscious thought/emotion that children cause. HOLIDAYS SHOULD NOT CAUSE EMOTIONAL SET BACK:):)

HE IS A GOOD ALBEIT FLAWED MAN. BETTER HAPPIER LIVING ALONE THAN WITH A LIAR. MAYBE HE FINDS LOVE. MAYBE NOT. HE AND HIS CHILDREN BELIEVE HE IS WORTHY OF LOVE AND RESPECT.

so that was my unsolicited feedback. time to step off my soapbox and hit -submit feedback-

every once in awhile people FINALLY choose to forgive rather than let bitterness control life. I am not an author. that said, i will share my opinion and you will not overestimate its potential value lol:-).

The character hit HIS rock bottom with his drinking. Building and moving into cabin are obvious signs he himself has grown weary of wallowing in his misery. He truly loved her. He will always love the memories. Since he is fictional anything is possible. He can man up. tell his adult children that he loved raising them with their wonderful mother. he loved it!!! tell them he loves each memory. how wonderful the love was! ask forgiveness for making them choose. and for turning to them for sympathy. Forgive the ex. Feel compassion for her. DO NOT RECONCILE UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCE. DO NOT SPEND ANY MORE TIME BLAMING HER FOR HIS EMOTIONAL STATE. SHE NO LONGER CONTROLS HIS HEART. HE IS A FREE MAN WITH A MORAL CODE HE WANTS TO LIVE BY. Yeah he wallowed. a little too long?? maybe he really dealt with all his emotions. He can live in his own skin instead of just existing. true recovery is time consuming and tedious.

one more thing maybe two more. His ex ought to only enter his personal thoughts MAYBE EVEN SAD MOMENT OF REFLECTING ON WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN when events like birth of grandchild arise NO MORE ANGER. holidays should be filled with conscious thought/emotion that children cause. HOLIDAYS SHOULD NOT CAUSE EMOTIONAL SET BACK:):)

HE IS A GOOD ALBEIT FLAWED MAN. BETTER HAPPIER LIVING ALONE THAN WITH A LIAR. MAYBE HE FINDS LOVE. MAYBE NOT. HE AND HIS CHILDREN BELIEVE HE IS WORTHY OF LOVE AND RESPECT.

so that was my unsolicited feedback. time to step off my soapbox and hit -submit feedback-

every once in awhile people FINALLY choose to forgive rather than let bitterness control life. I am not an author. that said, i will share my opinion and you will not overestimate its potential value lol:-).

The character hit HIS rock bottom with his drinking. Building and moving into cabin are obvious signs he himself has grown weary of wallowing in his misery. He truly loved her. He will always love the memories. Since he is fictional anything is possible. He can man up. tell his adult children that he loved raising them with their wonderful mother. he loved it!!! tell them he loves each memory. how wonderful the love was! ask forgiveness for making them choose. and for turning to them for sympathy. Forgive the ex. Feel compassion for her. DO NOT RECONCILE UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCE. DO NOT SPEND ANY MORE TIME BLAMING HER FOR HIS EMOTIONAL STATE. SHE NO LONGER CONTROLS HIS HEART. HE IS A FREE MAN WITH A MORAL CODE HE WANTS TO LIVE BY. Yeah he wallowed. a little too long?? maybe he really dealt with all his emotions. He can live in his own skin instead of just existing. true recovery is time consuming and tedious.

one more thing maybe two more. His ex ought to only enter his personal thoughts MAYBE EVEN SAD MOMENT OF REFLECTING ON WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN when events like birth of grandchild arise NO MORE ANGER. holidays should be filled with conscious thought/emotion that children cause. HOLIDAYS SHOULD NOT CAUSE EMOTIONAL SET BACK:):)

HE IS A GOOD ALBEIT FLAWED MAN. BETTER HAPPIER LIVING ALONE THAN WITH A LIAR. MAYBE HE FINDS LOVE. MAYBE NOT. HE AND HIS CHILDREN BELIEVE HE IS WORTHY OF LOVE AND RESPECT.

so that was my unsolicited feedback. time to step off my soapbox and hit -submit feedback-

But the kids don't. Yes, the postcards are juvenile, and he should be past that.

I STILL have not read anywhere where the kids thought their mother was at fault for the divorce. They haven't chewed her out for cheating, no "How could you?!", no anger for breaking up their family. It still seems they put all the blame on their father. It is the KIDS who don't get that she cheated.

That phone conversation with Mary, after he sent that postcard?

"For you, and only you, I promise. And I am not the one to break promises in this family," I said.

"Dad...!" she replied.

"Oops, sorry!"

"Never mind", she replied."

What was being said here? Is Mary chastising her father for bringing up her mother's cheating? And, is he APOLOGIZING for bringing it up? Someone clear this convo up for me.

I'd probably rant and rave about the RAAC ending, but I'd still want to know. If he gets back together with his wife, I absolutely want to know how he is gonna get past his trust issues.

The problem of whether or not they can reconcile turns on whether she can say something that shows how much she always loved him and how she regrets her stupid affair which was all about her and nothing to do with him.. But personally I could not forgive her or even the kids for wanting me to let bygones be bygones.

Some really great moments and lines here. The case of Cindy was a spectacular illustration of how he is coherent in his position.

Average Wanker, shut it you knob.

That's very brave of you. But not very clever. Would you care to try again? This time put some effort into it. This attempt at an insult was lame at best. Of course you should really do something about your temper it obviously gets the better of you at times. Maybe you should focus on the story? Instead of what other people say? after all we both agree it is a Good story. So I don't really see why you are upset.

A good chapter, well done.

Thanks

The problem with reconciliation is that she cannot ever be trusted again. Even in the meeting that she begged for, she lied and said that the affair had been going on for two months. He knows for certain that it was eighteen months. She blew her only chance, IMO.

The problem with Eileen is that she has a broken moral compass and needs to be repaired. For her to say that she would give her life for her husband and yet demonstate a behaviour that she knowingly would not tolerate in her husband shows her to be shallow, self centered with no integrity..

. . . and this story in particular, are headed downhill but not very fast. Kiernan's (even has a wussy name) inability to get on with his life does not bode well for this story.

P.S. So far he is doing everything RIGHT! Although many women wouldn't see it that way.

I like the story less as it goes on and he continues to be mean, spiteful, and petty There is too much of that and too little of any other aspect of his life,

As said below, the male is being a sorry-ass cry baby. Makes for a drippy, disappointing story.

Seems clear that a cuckolding wife is going to be forgiven and the cuckolded former husband is going to lose the balls he was growing.

to allow all winners and no summers. TK U MLJ LV NV

they were not like her because they were not cheating fucking whores. 18 fucking months of fucking someone else is not an affair - it is a kiss off - a 2nd marriage. well written 5

I sense a reconciliation here. After the anniversary postcard remorse and now the retirement cabin built it seems that's his next logical step. What the fuck. We'll see...

Five stars.

At this point you are your own worst enemy...you could move on, you just refuse. For you to still refuse to forget the bitch makes you far less a person.

Tune in!

There has been nothing written about what Eileen is doing or feeling. The one sided presentation in the last two chapters causes us to get fed up with Kiernan's problems. Still it all very real. Eileen has not evolved that we know of. How can we be sure that the children did not chew her out. Certainly he has pointed out to the kids that it was an 18 month affair... Didn't he? This business of a last encounter is unbelievable...

He thought...."On the one hand, I was losing my daughter. I don't think any Dad takes that very well, but hey, they have to leave the nest one day."

HA! Not every Dad! When I walked my only daughter down the isle and gave her hand to my son in law to be, I leaned forward and whispered in his ear...."No returns!"

And now I have two beautiful granddaughters and they have a wonderful marriage.

What did he expect, she made it clear she was a slut when he met her; so why the big surprise? I have no sympathy for him; you get what you pay for. I refused sex before marriage and yeah, I never got a second date if it turned out she was a slut; but still never lacked for dates; and you would be amazed at how many looked me up later when they realized how empty a hedonistic life is. Well it took a while; but I found my true love and 35 years later, we're still happily married!

you are doing a good job of portraying his emotional struggle. Very authentic.

She is madly in love with you . . .

She has a funny way of showing it.

Either take her back or forget her. Either way, man up and move on.

"On the one hand, I was losing my daughter. I don't think any Dad takes that very well, but hey, they have to leave the nest one day."

Heh, my daughter was 26 and when I walked her down the isle and gave her hand to my soon to be son in law, I leaned forward and whispered, "No returns!"

I often wondered what my own FIL thought, may he rest in peace. I was only 19 by a few days and his daughter was only 18 when he gave me her hand. That was 37 years, 2 kids and 5 grandkids ago....

it will never heal and may become more infected. TK U MLJ LV NV

An emotional journey. Still love it. Still five stars.

I hate to say it in a way, but with the lead in this thing being such a drunk and out of control, despicable mental case, I'm leaning towards liking the wife much more than the asswipe. Just maybe he will get drunk, drive into a tree and end this pathetic dissertation. He doesn't deserve either of his kids nor his ex. The ex is stupid for trying to hang on. I'm almost certain there will be reconciliation. However, I'm hoping Eileen gives him the gate.

They hurt each other, her with her actions and him with his moments of pain. However considering how long they had been together, and based on how he reacted when they tried to swing one time she knew how badly he would take it.

She feared growing older and risked it. She put him into a spiral of pain that he has not been able to figure his way out of.

Your assertion that she should dump him, I would say is erroneous. If anything they need to have an actual conversation but only their kids would have been able to bridge that pain.

I also think that by not having a talk earlier, it allowed anger and other issues to fester.

He looks at his wife, still with love in his heart, and is angry because of it.

Given the wife's known proclivities - and not just the cheating and monumental deceit - she has been getting a lot of sex after the divorce. The way that they originally met each other is definitely relevant. As a young man that was a clue he never quite put into a larger picture of who she was at heart. She was slutty and self-absorbed. Not character traits that would fall away of their own accord.

Anyway, he is a wallower and a drunk. From the very first day after he found her cheating he was a loser. He's like Fast Eddie but way worse. The postcard stunt and everything else, that's fine with me but do it sober and have some fun and get your own life together.

By the way, who the fuck is Tammy? Someone please fire that stupid bitch.

But why has the author turned the protagonist into such an asshole?? What is the point of this? He is unlikable to say the least.

The other thing that screams out here is: Why does a man, horribly aggrieved due to soul-crushing marital infidelities have to rush into divorce. Some of these men have to start in with the post-nuptial agreements. That is the way to go. You might actually get back to a good spot with the stupid bitch, but you will at least test her resolve and be protected.

...why having removed a female's panties one would press them to face and sniff them.

I mean the source awaits spread wide and waiting. Your nose pressed against her litoral sheath, while your tongue, from bottom to top separates the enfolded covering of her flower...her fresh scent allowed to tantalizingly escape.

Instead of the stale aroma of who knows what.

Could be my preference stems from the abhorent thought that the my nose, and lips might contact a crusty residue or worse still a slimy substance!

I knew a serial cheating wife whose third husband had a prediliction for sniffing panties. Evidently he used to offer to buy the panties of barmaids and female bartenders in the years prior to their marriage. Once married he exposed that fetish to her. She was his second wife.

For close to a year she demonstrated her contempt for him by leaving her panties on floor for him to find every Friday when he returned from working out of town for Montana railroad repairing railbeds across the state.

During her hour commute home two full loads of her younger lover's seed would have time to ooze out from the deepest recesses of her pussy where he lover had deposited them during their mandatory marathon sex session. She told her lover how she had shivered while feeling her battered cervix sluff of his coating and slowly enlarge the warm gooey puddle in her panties. Then lounging in a hot bath she would smirk as she watched him come into bathroom, panties in hand and looking longingly at her burt his nose into that silk covering while rubbing his groin awaiting his Friday night blowjob, which was extent of their intimacy for years until she cut him off completely including access to her panties

From her declarations, he minded not not being allowed any intimate contact, but without success he begged and pleaded for years to be allowed to press his face into her panties once more

Oh, yeah! You can feel it coming....he's gonna take her back! Doncha just LOVE wimpy guys????!!!!!!

On the road to taking her back??? No fucking way. 18 months of her fucking someone else and lying to him and he dumps her and that's destroyed because he get a hard-on? Looks to be going downhill fast.

Please, no reconciliation. She does not deserve it.

To these commenters asking for "no reconciliation" I have one thing to say - you are fantasizing.

Your feelgood fantasy is built on a dream that a good-looking woman would be waiting for you up to eternity and that you would be repeatedly rejecting her, feeling like you are a superman that no woman could resist and that you are on a godly moral high plane.

Here is the reality for you - when you pass 50 you are not going to be irresistible to anybody and for the most of you, you never were. No woman would wait for your overweight beer "muscles" nor for your overblown sense of self-worth. You would most likely end up with Hanna and her five sisters in your dream of eternal admiration of non-existing woman. Wake up and smell the coffee.

No way does he get a settlement on a nonsense alienation of affection lawsuit. He more than likely gets laughed out of court if his state is one of the nine that even would hear the case. And he gets a big lawyers bill.

It's not reconciliation at any cost, it should be reconciliation with conditions and boundaries. IF she is still available. No kids at home, most beautiful woman in the room, I knew one and after her husband traded her in on a newer model she ended up married to a millionaire and leading a plush life. RIP, Joyce. I loved you too.

R.

Contrary to what some commenters believe, there are more available quality women than H would know what to do with if you are, as he is portrayed, a well-employed professional and decent looking. The drinking bit is just a poor plot device for demeaning H and setting up a potential RAAC. BTW, the slut is suffering consequences that aren't nearly as severe as she deserves. And "Vicki-the-lawyer's" anger at her client because she thought the marriage could be saved in the prior chapter was completely unprofessional.

Darkdonut may have beer muscles, but for any guy of fifty who's employed, educated, and physically just OK with a decent personality, the world is full of widowed and divorced women who are decent, interesting, and want companionship. The wife is a cunt as written...idiotic, really, if she would go for a guy with a line like this:

"I see that I am starting to get at you. Your rude rejection is a blessing. Now that I know that, let me tell you that I am here for you, and only you. No need to be jealous. None of the women I know come close to your beauty or your charms. Some are pretty, but you are beautiful. When you need Xavier, you only have to ask."

And the scene on the motel balcony didn't indicate any likely break-up, just remorse over being caught. The characters are just written inconsistently, and the RAAC is being forced.

this total loser will get back with his ex wife! They really deserve each other. Both of the main characters exhibit no actions that would make anyone like them one little bit!

Moving on toward reconciliation. I have read this before, but I really don't remember it.

I totally agree with anon:

"the world is full of widowed and divorced women who are decent, interesting, and want companionship"

Past 40, a man's value as a partner goes up astronomically if he's in decent shape and has a successful career. It's women who get slapped in the face by mother nature. No longer young and perky, they're covering up stretch marks, cellulite, and sagging tits.

If Kieran stopped moping after his slutty ex-wife, he could've easily landed himself a trophy wife at least ten years younger. Most of my wife's female friends went to university and sacrificed long-term relationships for successful careers. That was a big problem as they got older, because men typically look for youth and beauty in a woman, and don't give a shit what job they do. Their careers added absolutely nothing to their desirability.

When those women were in their thirties, biological clocks started ticking. I remember many evenings with my wife consoling desperate friends who were panicking they'd left it too late to find a decent guy and start a family. They ALL ended up marrying older men...

Ahh, nothing like old whores and the pathetic men that can't live without their smelly old, well used cunts shoved in their faces.

This pathetic wimp is going to take this cheating whore back .

I knew it .

How embarrassing

I am surprised that this Man did not beat the Hell out of her Lover . She beat up the Doctor not him

⭐⭐1/2 This story is doing the cuck drift.

Maybe these women are not Eileen but that is to their credit. They are not lying cheat untrustworthy bitches. I for one am not liking the direction this tale is headed. The mc has stated his case for never having anything to do with the cunt again, please don't make him a wussy cuck and take her back when there are literally millions of women in the world to choose from.

Again, does David know that his bride thinks that her mother’s adultery is no big deal?!? If a woman believes that it’s okay for another woman to cheat, then she will do it herself eventually!

ZK

Why do I get the feeling you're about to go full-blown cuck? This RAAC is obvious from a continent away.

I just hope this is not heading for a reconciliation

MC is definitely hooked on ex, reconciliation on the horizon

I fear a RAAC on the way. Too bad, it started out well.

I usually favor reconciliation … but this slut doesn’t deserve it.

What a wimpy ass MC, for the love of God, why do author's write a reconciliation story with a wimpy MC husband who can't move on? Like seriously do they get off on a wimpy husband? And the way the whole family treated the MC there's no way in hell he still love her that much like the author's portrays. He's supposed to be a grown old matured man make it as such.. I like reconciliation Stories only if it's done right. This story though the author just pile's on the misery of MC and his love for her I can understand for some months or a year after that sure he might still love her, but he got to know it's time to move on and realised it, this MC husband though, and let's face it their no genuine remorse and action proof by ex wife to take her back...just another author who loves giving his MC cucked fetish and misery pining for his love.