All Comments on 'Tentaculus'

I want to know if there is more to this story?????

what's up with the ending? you ended right in the middle of the scene! pleeeeeeease write more!

...but seemed to end rather abruptly. Will you be continuing it?

That was totally amazing and I hope that there are more chapters to this story.

Smexcellent story! I love the innovative take on ye ole hentai genre. But, we want more! You cant leave me hangin like this; put me back in the game, Coach. XD

That, was fucking brilliant. You have a talent for writing (:

I really hope you put up more chapters

Excellent writing, for starters. I loved how it was a different kind of tentacle story, not forced-sex, eighteen tentacles in every orafice normal tentacle stories.

MOAR PLZ!

Seriously, the best tentacle story I've ever read! Eagerly waiting for a sequel. :)

that was HOT! Cant wait for the sequel!

That story was amazing! Lol! Couldn't believe it!

please please write more

all i could think about when reading this was " i want a guy like that"

excelent story and excelent writing, prefect details,

loved it

and looking very very very forward for more

More please !!!!

I was hoping to have the second part up before Christmas, but the person proofreading for me has been very busy. If I don't hear back within a week, I'll see about getting somebody else. Thanks for your patience and for the wonderful feedback~ I really appreciate it!

That is a wonderful story, I mean it. please keep going!

This was incredible to read :) Very well done! It ended so abruptly though and at the end I found myself disappointed that there wasn't more. This has become my new favorite story.

this is sooooo hot n sexy n awesome n cute :D more please!! :D

Left me wanting more.

I personally never got into the whole tentacle fetish, but this was an amazing story. I really wish it was continued to see how their relationship developed. Plus he was sweet not wanting to take advantage of her and actually caring for her.

Bro! Need an update hehe :)

Where's part two?

Such a good read, not too long, not too short. Enough story, but enough sex too :) You really inspire me to get writing myself.

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Wish there was a little epilogue. Other than that it was hot as hell. Being that I'm in a similar situation (early thirties without a man in sight) I can say without a doubt that that was unbelievably erotic.

This was so hot, well told, and I can't get enough of it

Hot as fuck. Well written too. A++

I want more chapters of this story as well as. I want Tentaculus 1,2,3,4,etc, etc, etc.....

I like that The woman is a willing partner

Loved this, but it kinda left me hanging.

Loved this! Tentacle sex is a fave, and a fantasy!