All Comments on 'A Death in the Family'

I hope you wrote or are writing more!

Your pacing and writing are great. Keep it up.

Very well written! I hope you'll be back with more.

"They were packing their bags and Cynthia said, "I suppose we should have THE TALK, shouldn't we?"

Huh?

He WAS shacked up with Kelly. When did Cynthia get in on the act?

Enjoyed this story hope you are writing additions chapters to this beautiful love story.

...............that for whatever reason you never really finished this wonderfully fulfilling and compelling story. Probably impossible for anyone not familiar with the rules and administrative procedures of a church environment to realistically complete this story, so you have left many of us hanging - so to speak - wondering how this matter might one day be resolved to everyone's mutual acceptance..

I liked the story buy hoping Cynthia would confront Andy and then Cynthia and Andy would get down to business in her office. I pictured Cynthia as a middle-aged slightly plump woman with giant tits that wasn't getting any at home and Andy took care of her pastoral needs and they expanded the flock.

Good story, could've included a chapter with Andy and Cynthia. But you end it with them having a talk, hmmm.....

Well written ! A co-worker told me about a friend of his that had died and left a widow with two children. He said that he and another guy escorted the widow lady home after the funeral made out with her on the way, and then took turns fucking her when they got her home..