by NPC01
Another great addition to the series! I have been anxiously waiting for a month to see how this was going to work out and I wasn't let down!
I've checked everyday waiting for the story! Amazing! I cried through it! So well done! Please tell me there's more? I never want this series to end!
Finally! You had my stomach turning with chapter 8 with al that drama XD I love this series. I hope you'll continue further ^^
Its just so amazing the series wish i had someone like Erica in my life
thank you for the happy end. I expected some kink at the end, but good job anyway. nice story
The most amazing series ever! It was so beautiful, I felt like I really knew them it was so good! You're an amazing author, I wish I had someone like Erica! <3
No words can say how much I love this. I read it so many times that I dream about it. It is like seven pounds with will smith. You know you are going to cry but you watch it over and over again. It is just finanmial (lord knows I cannot spell lol.) great job. This should be a freaking movie. Seriously!!!!!!!!
Damn...i never thought i would be up here about cry on literotica. This is the best story ive read on this website. You should make this into a book, seriously!! You can touch people with the written word.
Thank you very much NPC01 for such a wonderful story. Also for a story that is very unusual for such a site as Literotica. Whilst there has been quite a bit of sex and related bdsm events there has been love shining throughout the story and masses of emotion for the reader to feel they have been there watching everything happen.
Thanks again for such a great read.
What an absolutely amazing series! This is by far one of the best I've read! It's a shame there aren't more of your stories to read...you are simply brilliant! Was amazed at how you wove sex, eroticism, love, punishment, drama & sadness into this fabulous tale that ended with me (a grown man) crying as Anna screamed out "I love you" near the end of the story. Thank you for giving me the pleasure this story brought me. I'm only wishing there were one more chapter detailing their loving life together as Dom & Sub...and lovers!
This series was amazing. From 1-9...just truly amazing! It shows that the BDSM world is FAR from cut and dry. I myself have been through something like this story and it shows that just like any other relationship, there are trials and errors. This writer did an amazing job with this and seriously, should write MORE! <3
i love this story ch 1-9 it took a turn and it truly shows that a mistress and slave can fall in love i wish to have this relationship with another girl, someone to control me but to take care of me tell me everything will be ok
Truly hoping there is another chapter, this story is great....;-)
This story made me cry so much. Pleas, please, please, write another chapter. I'd love hazing Roz envolved. I want to see how it goes with her parents and Eric being the Knight in Shinning Armor. You're a great writer. So brilliant! This story was just moving and wonderful. I loved it so much. Even if you don't write another chapter, I just wanted to express my appreciation for your work.
I have read this whole story now, I got referred here by a friend who also loves it and has read countless times. This is so amazing. Beautiful. It could be so much more! You should write more! Really.
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It's strange but no matter the reason, whenever I'm sad or lonely this story can always pull me in and warm my heart.
I love this story and wish there were more like it on literotica not just about the sex but also the feelings a sub and Dom can have for each other. Really excellent, you really should write some more stories on here
I was reading this through the list of Lesbian stories initially and missed this chapter, as did some others based on the comments left there. Might have been better to stick this in the les category for the sake of it getting seen rather than non-erotic
Please please please write more this is just too lovely to end now.
Oh my goodness this is the best story I have read in a very long time! I started reading last night and it really pulled me in and I read 6 chapters in the night before I realized it was morning and I had to go to my classes but I was luckily able to finish reading at my lunch break! Anna was so relatable and Erica was the epiphany of a loving Dom, I admit I got so into the characters I cried in chapter 9! You are a very talented writer and thank you for sharing this story to the world! :)
OMG THE FEELS!!! I cried alot during this,.. the love!!
Thanks for writing it!
Hope to see more stories from you one day.
I loved the whole series so much emotions and lust it was fantastic! Thank you for the best erotic story I've ever read!
Honestly I am not an emotional girl at all! However the relatabillity between me and Anna brought me to tears in Ch.9! You are extremely talented and I hope you write similar stories to better literature as a whole.
I find it very, very disgusting, how the main character (Not Erica) thought she was being spiteful, for refusing to be with her abuser. I wouldn't accept to be with my abuser, for all the "I love yous" or all of the good things he/she promised me. I felt like her accepting of her abuser's measly little promises of change was quite quick, especially after something like suicide (a desicon like that that doesn't happen easily, you know). I would've loved seeing her "lover" actually get what she deserved. Heartbreak, over having your victim leave you? She wasn't dominating, she was an asshole! I think the ending was too easy on Erica, she barely had to suffer even an OUNCE of what she did to the poor girl! How can you write something like this and think it's at all acceptable!?
I'm so mad yet satisfied since I need to wake up early tomorrow yet I spent hours crying over this wonderful piece of work. And my entire face is soaked with tears. Thanks.
For a story called "Student Lesbian BDSM" to actually end up being really touching and make me happy and care for the characters. Very well written.
There is one thing I didn't quite understand though. Why did Gwen even give Anna cocaine? I can't see any reasonable motive for it, it doesn't make sense to me.
Also, I imagined Erica as Mia Fey the whole time, there were just too many similarities.
~THIS BOOK OFFENDED ME ON SO MANY LEVELS. AS A BISEXUAL WOMAN I MUST SAY I'M QUITE TORN BETWEEN WANTING TO BE ERICA OR ANA.
jk Im still a man,BUT WE ARE WORKING ON THIS OKAY?!!!
Now yes we do live in a society in which we sort of dive into rape culture. And i question whether or not I should feel guilty abouto jacking off to this. On a whole. Great job. However I would like to point out that this kinda sickened me to know that society has become so numb to right and wrong. I mean THIS STORY IS ABOUT ABUSE. YET WE LOVE IT!!! SHE ENDS UP IN A HOSPITAL FOR FUCKS SAKE WHY DOES NO ONE GET THIS!!! It's messed up... .....yet society has made this glorified..many has turned it into a desirable thing....
...oh well.....not my fucking coop of crazy ass chickens...
This is my 2nd time reading this novella. I love this story.
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Omg this is amazing it has everything sex,drama,love omg my hearts about to explode. Ok anyway i wanted to say you did a great job with this story its amazing. I hope u make another chapter if you do i will defiantly read it.
I've read these chapters several time and have to say this is one of the best stories on many site by far. I noticed that it was written in 2010, I hope you have continued on with your writing. Thanks for sharing.
I AM SO COMMITED, JESUS. I CRIED, MY FIRST CRY OVER A FREAKING EROTIC STORY. YOU SHOULD BE PROUD.
Such a rollercoaster of a story, with characters so well drawn that you live and die with every twist and turn. I'm glad they have got their happy ending, but would still love to hear more about how their relationship develops as well as Erica's nieces.
A very competent writer who knows how to tug at the heart strings.
Ending is Epic but I beg you to continue this story. It's the best story I have ever read about lesbian BDSM
holy fuck i mean damn originally i was readimg for the smut but now im fucking invested like im crying oh my god i ship it my girls fuxk i love this
Engrossed all the way through. The last part certainly choked me up!!
Absolutely amazing, the drama and emotions of the last chapters is impactful. One can feel the pain and heartache the whole time, which hits far harder than the caning or punishments of earlier chapters. It's a human drama with some lesbian bdsm thrown in to add some spice. Heavy flashbacks to reading Sunstone the first time. Thank you for a wonderful read.