by blake9110
I really loved your story. The pace was good and I was able to enjoy the story even more because of the way it was well detailed.
Please write more!
Not realistic, but very very hot. Great details and plenty kinky. I'll suspend disbelief for a story this exciting ;)
Great work!
You brought me 'into' this story as it was so well written. The tenderness of how everything came about was done so perfectly that I was able to 'be you' and feel what you were wanting to relay to the readers. You built the story up gracefully and with just the right amount of detail. This was very enjoyable to read and I thank you for not making it a 'slam bam thank you mam' type story as there is too many of those already. Great story written very well. Thanks for a totally refreshing experience.
Oops, the areolas were quarter size and the nipples sprang to attention...
Great story Blake but it would be good if you knew anatomy better.