by rpsuch
The story is moving slowly, but the characters are very interesting.
You have one comment that states that we are on chapter 63. He's complaining it's going nowhere..... And he's still reading, amazing. Fuck him and you do your thing like you do,ciao.
Ashley's humor is dry and cutting. When she gets going, her poor father gets skewered every time.
This series started out hot and steamy. Now the sex has gone behind closed doors, but the characters have developed into real people. Guess the author has learned from all that he has read on Lit! :D
The author is now writing chapter 72. We can only hope that it gets better and better (and it does!).
This story is much like Ashley's and Jeff's relationship. It develops and gets richer. I think it is great!
I look forward to the next installment...
I can’t take the 1 page chapters anymore! Great story but not worth the aggravation, I am out. So sorry that you would not be teachable in this.