by Cookmagee
" It was then that I realized my cock wasn't in her mouth at all, but deep inside my sister. "
Have you actually experienced either one? It's kinda hard to mix 'em up...
There could be so many possibilities with this story it almost saddens me to find it such a short 2 parter that wasn't written with much thought put into it.
I'm tempted to actually write a story or three and give this idea some justice.
simple. hot. fantastic. great situation, great realization, great progression, just...awesome! forget longer or more complicated, this is perfect porn length. it doesn't drag. I love it.
delete and combine the two chapters together they are way to short and the story is far from finished. you need to write two or three LONGER chapters as is it was a waste of time. half a story( and this was less than half) is worse than no story at all.
Fantastic job. The only thing disappointing was seeing that the author has no other stories. Please, keep writing.
Great story I love these kind of stories . I would like to see a few more chapters. Like other people have said this story is way to short . Maybe in future chapters you could get her pregnant , or her ass, or date her hot friends .3