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by Cromagnonman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Brill

****

HighlandLaddieHighlandLaddieover 7 years ago
a good little tale

of cross and double cross and what a skank she was...well rid of her...

texstertexsterover 4 years ago
Great story in need of an editor

Really enjoyed this story, so please take this as constructive advice-it could do with an editor to catch the little mistakes, and to even out the pacing - it seemed like it was going to be a longer story, then all of a sudden sped up and rushed through the end. I could see this breaking out into a multiple chapter story and developing the relationships. Still, I really enjoyed it as it is now, hope to see more!

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