All Comments on 'My Name Is'

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KupotekKupotekover 12 years ago

Felt like a Twilight Zone episode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Is this meant to be erotic?

TheAmazingGomezTheAmazingGomezover 12 years ago
So, what happens next?

Does it turn into a taut thriller like 'The Manchurian Candidate'? Is it a philosophical tale about the existence or nonexistence of free will? Is it an existential work-in-progress about the interactions humans have with society? Does it turn into a sleek spy story, with James Bond coming to the rescue? Is it an erotic horror story, like a sort of George Orwell meets the Story of O? Personally, I like to think it gets really pervy, but it's good to keep all options open.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

good story please continue it

bballheat102bballheat102almost 11 years ago
more more more

this is a great story is there anything further your gonna do with this story maybe go into the conditioning Mackenzie will recieve in future??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Woah

Love it omg soo cool I want this to be a book

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I loved this!

Really good little story. I would love to know what happens to Slavegirl 96 (555)!

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