All Comments on 'Hotel Californication Ch. 01'

Can't wait to see what happens next. Well written and full of promise.

A good start - I shall be following this series with interest.

Storyline original if not supererotic! Touchs of 'CFNM' with both Anal, Gay and Group sex thrown in, for good measure!

The twist with Diane was a complete shock to me. Well done!

Some of your story ideas walk the line for most people, but in general the story itself makes every story a great read.

You have some fountain of ideas that never seems to run out, and I sure hope it doesn't.

Val

Awesome story

Love the surprises and plot twists. Clever. Had me aroused.

Not certain when I read this the first time but I decided to reread the series. Great start and concept ,well written with some good character development that makes it easy to invest in Carol and Bryan. Didn’t see the Diane twist coming the second time which is a testament to the excellent writing or my terrible memory. Bravo.