by DexSinis
on your first story. I think you did a good job w/it. Although there were a few small mistakes the quality of the story out weighs them. So nice job.
I wish you the best of luck w/your writing, and hope to read more from you in the future.
The theory of parallel universes is a fantastic back drop to the story.A great read.
For reference, the Anonymous posting about the ending was not actually me. :P
I liked this story, where can I find this store and buy my own Doorway?
Though the semi-mind reading was a bit confusing. :/
Maybe next time you can write a story about a man cloning himself as a woman and transferring his memories into her or something, then they could f**k. That's my fantasy anyway. :]
What a great concept, the idea of having sex with your parallel universe self. I actually liked the idea of some mind reading going on too, as if they knew what the other would want to do. Like masturbating with a real life toy!
see Quantum Entangled Systems. I found it in a forum and linked it.
Search: QESdunn pbworks
Its a proposed pathway for building alternate universes
maybe the story writing can use the concepts some how