All Comments on 'A 'B' or not a 'B''

Very good read, great characters!

Deserves a solid 10 but could only give 5

Ps. Couldn,t stop smiling from the first page to the end

I've been reading stories here for what seems like forever, and I regularly vote, but this is the first time I've felt compelled to write a comment. And I do mean compelled. This story was amazing and beautifully written. Five stars just isn't nearly enough.

Thank you for writing this. Now I'm going to make a point of reading your other stories.

I really enjoyed your story. It was well written and had a good plot. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Beautifully written with excellently crafted characters and fascinating plot line. Makes the majority of the 'same old - same old' look very grey and mechanical. Will look forward to further writings from this talented author. By the way does Marta have an older sister ??

dam the mores and go full steam ahead. TK U MLJ LV NV

Quite possibly the best story I have read on this site. Captivating.

i cant help but agree with other readers, great writing great story thank you

Well written interesting and rounded story. Although it is is cute and sugary it is quirky and edgy with a real sense of what it is like to be completely intimate with another person. The descriptions of their sexual physicality most clearly demonstrates this so yes I loved it - and thanks.

best story i have read so far on here, good job.

Wonderful, believable love story, with enough sex included to be great! Love it!

What a wonderful story. Totally believable, insightful, and poignant portrayal of young love. It brought me back 50 years to my own experience finding my wife and deciding on the first date that she was the one.

You have the gift.

Thank you

A superior job. one of the best stories i have read. i will have to check out your other offerings.

I enjoyed the characters, the situations, the dialogue, and, oh yeah - the sex!

This story asks that question about the most important thing in our lives: who do we choose to love and why?

Choose to, not fall into. And it comes as close to providing a good answer as I've ever seen in literature.

And wonderfully written, realistic amateur learning-experience sex.

It made me wince that I couldn't give this one a five. There were just too many little niggling spelling and grammar errors, and that repeated "ya" thing just hit my inner English major tight-ass like fingernails on a blackboard.

Sorry, it's definitely a 4.5+.

In response to Talldarkfellow:

Your real name is Triggering.

Suck my dick and make it a bigern.

Well written with some exceptional uniqueness I've never read here and I applaud your efforts. The 2 very different characters that seemed to have been dumped or lumped into the same categories growing up but get to come together would be the "monster" power couple without all the social media bullshit attached, pretty cool indeed. BRAVO!!

Second best story on this board!

I can say this bravo but need a Lil bit more grammar help but you can write plus it'll help me think next time I see a gal it not the exterior its the inside that counts but I've seen that myself but in this day in age you can't see that know kind of passion an that is all passion in know its a panty fetish but I'm a critic an I give you more stars but five is not bad I've done more but not critiking so I can feel you this lass or mate keep the good work but needs a Lil grammar work but In a 1 to 10 I'll give yah an 8 ok it needs work but your minds there ok but as on kink to another its not the fetish it's the sex an the soft sex that the real love you have for him or her ok so like me or not look me up sum Time look for a wolfdino some time it me but once I get a page on here then most will under stand kinky shit is kinky shit ay so good luck mate now I got to fuck so keep going but I'll say this damn ok that is all

This story was quite excellent to read, and truly did provoke some deep thoughts ans feelings deep within. You get 5 stars from me.

Also, a quick address to the Anonymous poster on 9/17/14, about grammar. Next time you critique on grammar (which was a valid critique, along with some incorrect wordage and spelling in the novel..) ... please make sure that your post isn't 1 long run-on sentence. Please, as well, use complete words. Just a piece of advice ;-)

skipped most of it to say you're a romantic posing as a pornographer > Scotty

Absolutely loved this, tho I think I'm an A.

ABCD I'm guessing are personality types?

most unusual characterization i have ever read. truly unique with some depth... not your everyday read! wow.

Utter certainty on one side and many doubts on the other, a really clever, sharp, funny story with sparkling dialogue and appealing characters. Loved it to bits!

And read a lot of unfortunately predictable stories in here to find a gem like this. That's why I keep reading.

A beautiful love story.

I can read it again and again because it tells so many smart things.

Things that play a role in every human life.

No high-five for this story, a high-ten.

All the best from Germany

Had me on the edge of tears of happiness the whole way. Have to admit it parts of the story reminded me of a former girlfriend. Wish our story had turned out this way. What a beautiful love story. My woman's initials are AAL. Just in case God wants her to see my comments. Too bad AAL I miss our love. But I'm ecstatic it happened. Thank you. Please remember me kindly.

This story turned out to be more than I thought it would. So much more. It was absolutely a great read.

YES! You held the line all the way. Thank you so much.

LWlurker

5 stars is not enough! 12 paragraphs into it, I was hooked. Very well written, very good characters. Marta is just powerful/strong/borderline obsessed enough to make her fascinating. Being married to a smart/powerful woman myself, I totally get Mike and Fred. I noticed the condoms disappeared after the decision, and with Gloria running around in her negligee... So many possibilities for a part 2!

Makes you wonder when Marta said she had it handled when he said "How could they afford $ for the 2 yrs in rented flat?" Maybe she had already hoped that her Mother would have a plan to keep them at her house ... no rent or utilities etc. As Yogi said, " Smarter than the average bear"

Very well written. Reminds me of my first

Good premise.

But too talky.

And dialog leaves reality.

Four stars.