All Comments on 'Astarte Ch. 02'

Jerry in Washington state, USA - Although I don't care for incest stories in general, I enjoyed this chapter because you show the real love that exists with the siblings. I loved the revenge and justice on Harry and his family. I liked the scene of Jordan remembering Deon from earlier school years and the nice things he had done for her. I enjoyed the sex scene with Sally and Mary. I love that Astarte wants sex with Deon and hope you have a special powerful sex / loving scene of them in the next chapter.

Love the way your tale is progressing. Great story, great chapter. Keep'em comin

Wow. This story just gets better and better with every page. I love the fact that despite his powers, Gideon remains at heart, a decent guy. That's rarely seen in this kind of story, usually these tales turn into unintentional moral parables on why mind control is best left fantasy. Keep it up. 5 stars...obviously.

one of the best mind control story that i've ever read...

you really earned yourself 6 stars..

I really like the theme that our hero is having and the lifestyle he is leading.

I am intrigued with the idea that he is going to have sex with his mother and she will become pregnant. That's really hot.

With the three of them living together where he goes to school, and no one knows them, they could live as man and wives.

It will be hot when his mom's belly starts to swell up with his baby, and she will probably become extremely horny all of the time, because of the hormonal change in her body, and screw him half to death.

Thanks for the very erotic and sweet read.

Please keep 'em coming... I loved the premise, the protagonist, the writing; everything.

Simply wonderful !!

MORE PLEASE.

I'm loving it so far.

Looking forward to the rest of the series.

Can't wait for another chapter. Thanks again for not letting his new power go to his head. Again please keep the chapters coming. RG

Proof that a good heart, a big dick and the help of goddess will improve your sex life.

Hmm, maybe she's a couch person or a dining table person. lol

...and certainly pure lust. Some of it's really exaggerated, like watching WWE and knowing what's going to happen. It's all a bit too convenient, but since it's under "mind control" I can see it. 5

G'day! Love yr work. Always fives from me. My only comment is yr a bit light on body description. Keep up the good work, Dan

Your description of how to perform oral sex on a woman was one of the best I've read. Slowly and gently performing oral sex on a lady will not only arouse her, but generate not only a willingness but a need to perform oral sex on her partner but physical sex and other types of sex both partners will enjoy.