All Comments on 'Slaves of the Damned'

I tried to like this but it had too many cliches to light my fire.

...I think some details about the protagonist are required to make the story more interesting.Keep writing.

But only if there really is a story here. If there is, if the brutality serves some purpose, this has real potential.

Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate

Too much pain. And not the sexy kind, either.

I would love it if she was forced into orgasm and was humiliated for it.or double pentration or spitroasting.or maybe she grabs and holds on to his horns while she rides him?I dunno just throwing some ideas,this is really good and I'd love to see more of your work in the future.