All Comments on 'Took My Wife'

by horeyasfuck

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theaquarianpentheaquarianpenabout 12 years ago
my fault sorry tought Enlish in the getto for thirty years

they just don't want to learn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
The hubbie reached his gun..Too bad he didn't blow the niggers away.

I would have shot them but then the writer couldn't have the wife fucked by two NIGGERS and no story then,, Dosn't he know that it wouldn't matter.. it was a shitty story anyway

JonTaylorJonTaylorabout 12 years ago
Bitter and Mean

Your profile doesn't identify your sex, but my guess is you are one very bitter woman.

shaman43shaman43about 12 years ago
A waste

My god I used 5 minutes of my life reading this tripe. I am pissed I cannot get it back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
my new wife got taken

I was only married 4 months to my beautiful young wife. She came home late from work one day and was brought home by two 30 something black men. Her clothes were torn and hair a mess and it was obvious she had bee fucked hard by both of them. She was not a virgin when I met her and she had numerous guys starting in high school. I thought these guys had raped her but she had given it up for them willingly. She told me that they were going to provide her with the sex she needed since I could not satisfy her. We are still together and the two guys are here a lot. I am in chastity now and serve them all

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just A Couple Of Things

It makes my teeth grind when I see someone "shake their head yes". To shake one's head is a negative indication ONLY! To make a positive or affirmative indication, one " nods" their head. I would mark off 25 points for this unforgivable grammatical blunder alone.

Once the male got an erection while watching other men having sex with his wife, I began to hope they would come back and, at the very least, cut his balls off and perhaps his penis as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Learn The Language!!

At least it was short and made no sense at all!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Totally Senseless

Sorry, but this was ???. File 13 it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
THIS IS A PORNOGRAPHIC NONCONSENT STORY. THE HUSBAND IS FORCED TO WATCH.

In a way the story line makes sense, & here is why:

Some people have a voyeur side but are not aware of it. Those readers find it easier to enjoy a husband-forced-to-watch story, than a story wherein the husband willingly watches other men fuck his wife.

The same goes for gay-first-time stories.

SOME OF WILL ENJOY NONCONSENT STORIES WITHOUT GUILT.

• • •

Believe me when i saw my drunk wife groped by another guy by the campfire around midnight, i just froze, both my mind & my body were paralysed. I watched the scene as though i was watching a woman i did not know. I watched them from the dark. When he went to fetch 2 bottles of beer, i walked over & set down on the other side of my wife. I played dumb, so did my wife...

That was the night my own voyeur/cuck-wannabe side affected my behavior for the first time that i was aware of.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Gave you a 4 (☆☆☆☆). Your story is far from perfect but I like it very much because it resembles one of my jack-off scenarios!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

just a pile of shit writen in cloud cookoland i would make it your last

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

it always amazes me that on this site if a guy sees his wife getting raped it gives him a hard on what a strange reaction and they always want to shag a womans ass now there is not a lot if any differance between a womans and a mans ass both made just to sit on and shit through any man that want ass is on his way to becoming or has become a bender in my view as if there was no women around no doubt a guy would do to fill in, After all in the dark there would be no difference as i said just to sit on and shit through ie male and female

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gratuitous tripe.

geckolovergeckoloverabout 2 years ago

This story was written by a racist prick when he was drunk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

uf that was my wife i would have waited for later that night while my wife slept and gotten my baseball bat and beat her head in with the bat

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Jamal Part MMMDXXCI meets Martian Slut Ray. No plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

thats called rape you asshole

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Needs an epilogue, what happened to them as a couple

rickylaw01rickylaw0111 days ago

Well the dickhead husband admitted he cheated thoughout the marriage with his "friends" as he called them.

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