All Comments on 'Lessons Learned Ch. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
update please

Please update this story! This can't be the end! Too many unanswered questions. I just found this story yesterday and I could not out it down. So please update!

Ms_SassyFlurtMs_SassyFlurtabout 11 years ago
more please!!

Please update, what to know what happened next..

ShortyByNatureShortyByNaturealmost 8 years ago
Good but Confusing

I like the story but there are some inconsistencies with the characters last names. Sometimes Monroe becomes Moore, and Thomison becomes Morrison. That can be very confusing and frustrating as you continue to read. Also the relationship between Shane and Angela was a little unbelievable in some places because it was moving so fast. They said I love you after what two days. But If you can ignore some of those things it's a pretty good story.

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