by Pomegranate_Seed
I don't normally read in this category, but I really enjoyed this. Very well-written.
Especially for a first story - this was quite a story, well-written and very erotic. I think we have a new talent among us - welcome - and please bring us more. Five stars and thank you.
Your writing is wonderful. Even when I reached the scene where she is used by multiple 'gentlemen', which is normally not something I am usually interested in reading about, I still read on. Relaying this as a compliment to you, and hoping that you continue and write more!
:)