All Comments on 'A Ray of Light in the Darkness'

by zeeDifference

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HarryHillHarryHillalmost 12 years ago
I lost interest

as soon as I saw that monoblock of print, you lost me. There may be insightful writing in there some place, but I'm not digging for it.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
MULTIPLE REASONS TO SEE RAYS AT NIGHT

A searchlight....a warning beacon.....a flash light for guidance,,,,,a spotlight for ditch hunters,,,,or a UFO beam,. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Beautiful brightness

It's sad to see comments that prove their unwillingness to embrace the heart in this poetic expression, to see this loving offering slapped by meaningless rebukes and thoughtless distraction. Perhaps they think it's erotic, to heap abuse on you this way. :P

Your imagery is wonderful, and the mystery leads me to want to hear more of this story. Why are there people who fear the light? Perhaps the earlier comments are from such people.

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