All Comments on 'A Stringed Instrument Ch. 05'

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elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

Not exactly how I pictured using ropes and blindfolds. Ha ha! Absolutely lovely, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I will, though, of course ... as long as you need me to. :) ~ L

biercebiercealmost 12 years ago
love the climb

Nice scenes. Loved the rock climbing. Lovely interchanges. Looking forward to more. Thanks

GamecoxGamecoxover 11 years ago

wonderfully engaging story that gave some life to the characters & was very erotic at the same time. looking forward to the next chapter.

ihatejanestreetihatejanestreetover 11 years ago

There had better be more chapters to come. This story has got body and life and I'm keen to see how it all pans out. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

sensual mixed with a beautiful sense of humour - what more can you ask for!?! - i absolutely loved the rock climbing part - It almost felt as if i was there too. thank you for taking me along.

can't wait to see how the story continues.

<3 all the way from Germany

BramblethornBramblethornover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks all for the feedback! I finished the first draft of Chapter 6 today; my beta-reader is busy for a few days, but it should be up in about a week with any luck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Started reading your series yesterday - beautiful writing style, I love the way that you slowly build up the story. I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Awesome

You are amazing sweetie

JendehJendehabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

I started reading this series today. It is incredible. And while the sexy times are great it is your storytelling that truly shines. I'll review more later. Time to read the next chapter!

AthlantianAthlantianover 9 years ago
Loved it.

This is a joy to read... and thanks for introducing me to Einsturzende Neubauten - Black Swan ( Sabrina ), which is a fantastic song.

After you mentioned it and I couldn't recognize it, I found it on YouTube and listened to it, while reading the rest of this chapter.

Fantastic, as I said :)

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 8 years ago
Smile inducing

These two continue to make me smile and hope for more - both of them and for them!

J

LcnmdLcnmdover 8 years ago
An addictive story

So well written, and so passionate!

L

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 6 years ago
So lovely and playful

That last scene brought such a smile to my face, I ought to thank you only for that! But there's so much more, the slow pace of the narrative, with currents in increasing frequency, just love it.

Albanach2000Albanach2000over 2 years ago

Glasgow fishwife operatic soprano, now there's an idea to conjure with. Says a Glaswegian

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

Yeah live and different heights ...... Like in climbing rocks or eating tasteful or sexuality or success ........ Your writing is taking me easily with your journey you enfold and i feel like being part of this ...... Great

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