All Comments on 'Holly's Breeding'

shame you didnt find out before you ever married the trash

dump her then and there and get on with life

women like this you have to wonder if they have any brains at all and if they do how mentally ill they really are

What a piece of crap this was.

The sentence about the divorce papers should've probably been at the end. Having it at the beginning made it appear that they arrived 2 days before the party and I spent the entire time wondering why she was at the party if they were divorced or maybe he was divorced from someone else and only called Holly his wife. Could've had more detail in those areas.

Thanks! Very hot story and I hope you expand on this. Tell us about the year after Holly's gang breeding up to the divorce.

How sad and depressing. Another nigger fucking white trash cunt whore story. Can't you white pathetic wimp cucks think of something else to write about? Sicko's like you dont deserve to live and you do not earn the right to be called a man. If this story is in any way true the cunt whore for nigger cock needs to die a slow and painful death. Then quickly followed by you the writer.

What, no confrontation, no remorse, no confessions, an unfinished story with just a tease at the end about her having "morning sickness". Pretty weak story without much tension or plot.

you need to consider finishing

not stopping the gangbang,just watching.knowing she was drug.

All the guys complaining about your story are blissfully ignorant that their own wives, girlfriends and daughters are busily impregnating themselves with black studs right now!

More impreg please!!!

nigger wishes

....this was amazingly poor. Way to go!

Just another nigger loving author trying to make white husband look like wimps compared to niggers. Wonder she's not also a crack whore selling her disease ridden body for 50 cents to make money for ths niggers.Afterall the is the only way blacks know how to treat a woman

would have shot all of those fucking little degenerates with it. shitty writing also.

But the end of the story seemed as if the author became tired of writing the story and rushed the ending.

I don't mind finishing the story in my mind and drawing my own conclusions, but there is so much that could have been written in this story to give more impact to what she did.

I would like to know if sought out and she went to the young black guys for their cock to pleasure her, and if she was sorry that she was a whore for black cock?

You DO know that morning sickness starts several weeks into a pregnancy? No? Thought so...

Maybe the anonymous who replied to me should go to the same KKK meeting and tell them he reads interracial porn. The wives + daughters of KKK members crave potent black cock more than anyone.

the funny thing is white trash whores fucked by black men are the exciting thing and not when they are fucked by yellow or brown men...That does not arouse so much as much as a black dick fucks white cunt. That said, white women do need to get their heads checked. They go as missionaries and teachers to Africa and the Middle east. African men at least just fuck them, but Middle East muslims they fuck and disrespect them and still the white [especially hispanic sluts] take all the shit that is dumped on them..so white men keep ur white women close and if they dont behave beat them

Holly like all the dumb white bitches. Don't wanna be seen with a brother anywhere but between the sheets. They sure can fuck tho. Guess it because they don't get much real cock. Love to see them walking with a little zebra in the stroller and some dumb ass honky walking along with her paying the bills. I don't wanna live with the dumb cunts but gots no problem sticking my annaconda into every hole they got.

I didn't know monkeys could talk or write the one that just left the last comment must be the brightest monkey on LIT. It's a pity white hunters with black hearts can shoot such creatures and stuff them and put them in zoo's where they belong. Who knows maybe it's stuffed prick will be good for something the rest of the creature is worth nothing.

love to be bre this way Mary

Then how do you explain yourself?

For all of those who think that this doesn't happen. There is a story on the news Texas? about a white teacher who fucked 5 18 year old football players. She was caught when they shared the cell phone images. She's sentenced to 5 years, and guess what, her white husband was on the stand crying and pleading for her to be given probation. So um, yeah......cuckhold stories are true. Who knew?

waiting for the rest

typıcal whıte wıfe wants black cock and she got what she deservesç only better would be for her son to be forced to eat her wet pussy but <ı loved the part where the beer gut guy fucks her...we all know ıt whıte women love to be forced fucked by black men.

Such a hot fantasy, i came three times reading it!

What an awesome wife she is and if craves strange cock every so often thats good for the marriage. A fine piece of ass like her should be shared

why would she be sentenced at all for fucking 18 yr old boys

i loved this story, every girl needs to be black bred and then decide how much more she wants and needs

A nice mom turned into a dirty tramp nigg lover. My favorite kind of story, Dirty fucking whore. Her parents spent all that money raising her and she turns out like this. Damn. She's no good to white people now.

She's felt the black sausage. The excitement of the slut. She needs more.

What kind of man hides in the dark while his wife is raped? In most states men taking advantage of a wasted drunk woman could be called rape. So the husband who supposedly loves his wife does nothing to protect her. Then he goes on to divorce her. Not the kind of guy to have watching your back.

Another one in the grave

You know I really don't care. Who you want to screw. be it black white green yellow whatever. but the men of that race. that's how they treat women. and they know it and their women know it. and all women know it. but not to respect me

it take advantage of my wife. you're going to die, and if she was willing you're both going to die.. so think about this jar head next time you do that to a wife...

its fucking retarded how many of these stories have the men either being ok with their wifes cheating or just don't say anything fuck that where are the stories about the guys who do something about it.

The husband watches as his wife is ravaged by many men? What kind of bullshit is this? I don't care what race or religion. A real man stops the gang fuck of his wife. Fucking wimp.

then acts like they are married, make up your mind. Women like this one are a dime a dozen if she wants to be a BBC ho she should be sterilized and let become a ho/whore for BBC

I can't believe you made a part 2& 3 what were u thinking...........................?

As a middle aged white guy, I would welcome Holly in my house....knowing that she's a BBC Slut and has black children.

No problem here.....if she contacted me right now I would take her in and spoil and pamper her.

DJ

As a "married white Slut" I enjoyed this story it was very erotic with interracial and young men involved!

love to be bred by a youg black stud like this Mary

As a cuckold with a little dick I understand her need for Black Cock.

put the little white cuck in chastity or better yet castrate the wimp!!!

BREED STRONG!

BREED BLACK!

MAKE SURE THE CUCK NEVER TOUCHES THAT BLACK OWNED PUSSY AGAIN! ITS OURS NOW MOTHAFUCKA!!!!!!

Just a stupid story about nigger boys raping white married women because they are too ugly and look like porch monkey's to get their own women there fore the raping of wives. the husband was the wimp that probably wanted to suck nigger dick too. If that would have been me there would have been dead nigger all over the place with their miserable cocks cut off and shoved down their throats

Fuck all you rapist ,the wife /mother is one big slut the husband is one wimp piece of shit fore not stopping his wife from fucking those ass holes one big slut I hope they all get stds that kill them all slow.

I've been pregnant as well as a number of my friends and not one of us had morning sickness the verry next morning. And i deffinately wouldn't be getting pregnant with another mans baby let alone a to black kid, and i personaly don't know any woman that would or even fantasize about it.

If you paid attention to what you read he divorced the whore which means he's no cuck.

Yeah, all white wives and their young daughters (the younger the better) should be turned into black cock whores and bred by those huge big black cocks. Husbands/dads should facilitate their "transformation" into sluts for black cock as well as their breeding

To the previous anonymous commentator I can only say "grow up and get a life", good turn on story from engywwok it's what this site is all about, sometimes stories are dark and interesting and others a good fun read.

once u have gone black, you cant go back

great story, and I had an idea for a story that i was hoping you could to. my idea was around civiil war~ish time, three slaves break in their owner's, high class rich type, house, and punish him by raping and impregnating their daughter. if possible, could you get back to me on this?

So hot! Hi I'm Wendy, my fiancé brought up his fantasy of watching me with Blackmen two and a half years ago. We are being married June 2016 and after all this time of him telling me how hot it would be, and we watched interracial videos

I have decided that it has me so horny that I want to find a a Blackman well endowed

Who can expose me/us to this lifestyle. I have always liked it a touch rough in bed but after reading and watching white wives and black men together it seems they naturally take charge of us in bed. Loved this story. And yes I am wet and very horny

id love to watch holly get bred.

The story has been a smashing success: 502,025 views & 305 fav.

Great story which my wife and I both enjoyed. It's always a pleasure to see a good wife go bad, especially with black cock. My wife has cum on so many black cocks she has lost count of how many.

She started spreading her legs for blacks, and having them pump their baby batter into her white womb, back in college. When we started dating I knew what she was doing, but loved her anyway, especially since there was always plenty of stretched, sloppy pussy left over for me.

She especially likes black men who take charge, put her down on her knees, and have her suck their big black snakes without using her hands. It is very erotic to watch her bobbing around, trying to get their cocks in her mouth; and they often slap her face with their slippery cocks.

She is especially turned on by their copious amounts of cum. She loves "wearing" cum home to show me after she has been out on a black date. Many times they have to walk her up to the front door of our house because her face is so splattered with cum she can't see!

Sometimes I lick all the cum off of her, but other times I just take her directly to bed. Then, she wakes up the next morning with a nice crusty mask of cum on her face!

Your story was especially hot because it was a middle-aged woman who finally discovered the joys of putting out for black bulls of any age. She was breedable, she is probably bred, and the whole world will know what she did when she brings a black baby home from the hospital.

My wife has helped so many of her white, married girlfriends go black that it is almost ridiculous. Half the neighborhood wives are fucking black on the side. And, my wife is proud that she helped it happen.

This is my sister's story. She is a gorgeous, petite,5'3", 34-23-36, 115 ponds, never married, pale white, over 50 female, who looks much younger. She is a muscularly fit, tenured, Full Professor at a Historically Black College in the South with an enrollment of over 10,000 students. She has boldly claimed between 100,000 and 150,000 episodes of sexual intercourse with black men over her more than thirty years of teaching English. Those numbers exceed the reports of sex by red light window sex workers in Amsterdam! However, the black cock sex addicted English Professor had the advantage of frequent access to large amounts of group sex with up to thirty black men at weekly fraternity parties; for example, she claimed it was possible over the three day homecoming weekend for her to “score” sex with black students and especially alumni over a hundred times. She explained that she had used her seniority since obtaining tenure to secure several of the large sections (70+ to 90+ students and held in the small auditorium) of the required freshman English course each semester. She did this because 18 and 19 year old boys eager to pass were easy to control and seduce into having frequent sex with her and had great stamina when engaging in sexual intercourse. She held all day “office hours” two days a week but also had an “open door policy” and a couch in her office.

There is really no story here, but just fucking.

I also note that if this is her son's HS graduation, the son must be about 18, which means the wife has to be 34 at least and more likely about 38 or much older. You don't get pregnant very easily at that stage.

Anyhow, there is still no story.

There is no story here just a guy standing there and watching his wife get raped over and over again. I´m not even going into the rest of this stories because Iḿ sure he is going to use this opportunity to divorce his wife. What he deserves is to be taken out to the back yard and shot like the dog that he is. Another thing. A woman does not start throwing up the day following because she´s pregnant. it takes days later quite possibly a month before the effects of a pregnancy start to show. Make your stories belivable and then maybe you will have something worth reading.

If this ever happened to me i would be doing life in prison for multi murders

The lack of knowledge of biology exhibited by writers on this site is astounding. It is a true indictment of the U.S. Education System. The dumb statements, about morning sickness and getting pregnant from the first guy so others don't matter, don't even contribute to the storyline. They are merely ridiculous statements strewn into the story.

The story plot itself is terrible. The husband is responsible and thoughtful, the graduating son is brilliant, and the mother is apprehensive about having the party. So they invite the entire school - including sluts and thugs. Sure, sounds like a good idea. No way the punks raping the mother in the basement are Jake's, the son, friends. At most, someone known to him. But that is how the thoughtful parents decided to have a responsible party - by inviting the school trash. Why not limit the invitees to kids that were Jake's real friends?

Then of course, the mother is one of the most beautiful women in the world. So gorgeous that the punks can't resist pulling a train on her after they get her drunk. And she is so dumb that she either sits and drinks with them (why isn't she busting them for the alcohol?) till drunk beyond awareness or they spike her drink (how do they get her soda, etc? when they are boozing in her basement) I doubt they carried extra Dr. Pepper and iced tea with them to the basement. The other option is she is a total slut but the stupid husband never knew.

I realize that the goal of the story was to put a white wife and mother into a compromised position so multiple black guys could nail her. Problem is this was a dumb way to do it. The one positive about the story was that some of the description of the sex scenes were well done. Maybe those scenes were cut and pasted from elsewhere. Anyway, they saved the story from a *2* and got it a *3*.

Any erotica in this yarn crashed and burned in the basement scene. The writer needs to study reproductive biology before he writes any more ‘erotica’ (I use erotica loosely in this case). 1 star only because I can’t award zero stars.

This is a sickening mess of a bad story of stereotypes of black men, speaking in cliched argot, while doing terrible things to a white woman. This story would have been wrong for any civilized site when it was written, even more so now, when the national conscience is being raised about the terrible things this country has done to black people for hundreds of years. It's time for Literotica to ban these demeaning stories -- right now!

4 Liked when she got knocked up got my aunt mom sister and my cousin aunts daughter we all enjoyed iț

Whilst the first chapter started at an alright momentum, you need an in-depth knowledge analysis, of a woman's reproductive system.

I following chapters, meh. It requires additional work done to them. You need a moderator, as you have shown a lot of potential.

To the many people who are bashing the writer, how many of you, have ever taken the time and patience, to write a story and post it for all to read? That shit is difficult and it takes courage to do.

Well done engywwok, with time, you will improve💋

This was a Wonderful Hot Erotic story of a MILF that went Black and loved some BBC. The next chapter should tell more of the after events.

Not much!

The story need to be rewrite showing from the beginning how did Holly get involved with it ?

The story should start out as a cheating wife and work there in to the breeding holly

I would love to for you back to Holly college days were it start from where Holly start dating the black college Guy. Go from there