Heaven 695RC

yep!

people have no Idea

Cute

Nice twist on eternity.

Interesting.

Interesting theory

A new way of thinking about it that is clearly thought out, and wonderfully articulated.

I've read most of your stories already, and will definitely be checking out the rest.

Have you read Emanuel Swedenborg's Conjugial Love?

Your story is very like his description of how newcomers to the world of spirits are allowed to experience their conceptions of heaven. Just like your story, they quickly become dismayed with their limited view of what heaven was like. Then, with their misconceptions of heaven exposed for what they were, they were gently led to understand how heaven actually works.
You might want to check out his Writings. If the farce of needing a middleman between you and God to get into heaven gets to you; reading that the only requirement for entry is actually wanting to be there, is a welcome change of pace.