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Carried Away

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/03/12

Stark

Powerful writing.

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by bunny_girl_9412/10/12

A very sad story, powerfully written.

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by Anonymous08/10/15

Hemingway?

The writing strongly reminded me of some of Ernest Hemingway’s short stories: the word choice, the sentence structure, the compactness of the writing, the dispassionateness of the narrator. I sensed a slight feeling under the surface that no one was quite in control of their lives—they were just along for the ride. Interesting.

Barry

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by patillie07/12/16

Man that is good

Very compact and powerful, you should get back to writing here.

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