WTF was this shit?!
God knows what possessed you to put this in Loving Wives. I can see what you were trying to do - but it just didn't work. Maybe 'elf & safety' ruined it?
Needs a little more elaboration, and a little more backstory. In other words, not just one cookie, but a plateful of cookies, and an accompanying glass of milk!
It was cute and kind of fun but it was much too short and I agree that it needs more explaination and elaboration.
Thanks for trying.
Oh so many serious readers, so heavy the comments. It was a very cute little ditty, didn't need more length or depth. Certainly if Mrs. Santa has a "little" fling, it is in the right category. I'll smile on Christmas eve thinking about what's going on back at the north pole while hubby is scattering all that joy to the world.
Sweetie Claus might consider drafting Hubby Claus to give Cupid more aerial shots from the sleigh on St. Val's Day and help out the rabbit come Easter and the Great Pumpkin later in the year. She cannot be satisfied with sheathing Harrick once a year! Ho Ho Ho!
I got a chuckle out of this one.
Never thought of a bunch of randy and horny elfs.
A good laugh - thanks
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