Maybe we could all go camping together next.
I love how detailed they are. I could imagine it was me pinching and twisting her nipples!
This was one hot fucking story that got to the fucking point right now!!! My cock was hard as a rock two paragraphs in and stayed that way until I had filled a kleenex with cum twice! This is a fucking hot fuck story!
I liked that you put enough backstory in to set up the tension and desire but then still got them naked and on each other quickly. I'd like a bit more detail in your descriptions of the action but overall I came hard by the end and will be back to re-read this one again. Hot.
I love knowing if, when and exactly how successful I have been at exciting the reader. Keep the details up!
It has been too long since you wrote a story. Please write some more. They are so hot and get me so hard.
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