Deer Island

Hot...Hot...HOT!

Perfect description of my fantasy redhead, every detail and so hot!

Damn, way too short

This one could go on for several chapters and I would like to have you do that. But it is your story and you told enough of it to keep me interested. I had a few family members of the female persuasion that I remember fondly and regret my shyness at the time. Thanks for the trip down memory lane and the way I wish it had been. 5 stars

I have to agree with Rawmaster50...

The way you built up the characters I was looking forward to a lengthy, in depth story and was fairly disapointed when you ended it. But like he said, it's your story and I still gave it 5 stars. Great read and thanks for sharing!

Good story short ending

this was poised to be romantic blockbuster,the way u build yo characters was incredible,why did u have to end it?? was definately a good story,

Great story

Always enjoy reading your stories with an east Texas flavor!

Nicely done

I would have like to have read more of their lives, perhaps how they lived together and enjoyed each other bodies giving each other pleasure for many years.

Thanks for the read...

A Good Tale

well done, TR.

Excellent story...

Wonderfully written, romantic and erotic and pretty much flawless. I would love to read more, but it doesn't look like it's in the cards.

Did enjoy that !

A delicious story of finally requited passion.
5*
For some mysterious reason my character seems to have disappeared from the Literotica web site.
I am usually known as Oleguy.

Yes one delicious story. I almost want to beg for more but it probably is out of the question. Still a most delicious story.

so much unfulfilled promise

such an abrupt ending

have to agree with others

this is less than half a story, a GOOD writer would never leave it like this they would bring it to a PROPER ending. two more three page chapters would finish it nicely.

Good story

I read it before and enjoyed it then. Just got through reading it all over again and still really like it. 5 stars.

Old Memories

In the late 1950's I was at Barksdale ABF and for a summer I had a House boat on Caddo Lake. This story brings back many memories of the people in that area.

The story was just as I would envision it happening in that part of the country. Very descriptive and well written. 5*

I agree far too short

I too thought the story would b a lot longer and finished too abruptly, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️