This one could go on for several chapters and I would like to have you do that. But it is your story and you told enough of it to keep me interested. I had a few family members of the female persuasion that I remember fondly and regret my shyness at the time. Thanks for the trip down memory lane and the way I wish it had been. 5 stars
The way you built up the characters I was looking forward to a lengthy, in depth story and was fairly disapointed when you ended it. But like he said, it's your story and I still gave it 5 stars. Great read and thanks for sharing!
I would have like to have read more of their lives, perhaps how they lived together and enjoyed each other bodies giving each other pleasure for many years.
Wonderfully written, romantic and erotic and pretty much flawless. I would love to read more, but it doesn't look like it's in the cards.
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Anonymous08/20/13
Did enjoy that !
A delicious story of finally requited passion.
5*
For some mysterious reason my character seems to have disappeared from the Literotica web site.
I am usually known as Oleguy.
this is less than half a story, a GOOD writer would never leave it like this they would bring it to a PROPER ending. two more three page chapters would finish it nicely.
English
Hot...Hot...HOT!
Perfect description of my fantasy redhead, every detail and so hot!
Damn, way too short
This one could go on for several chapters and I would like to have you do that. But it is your story and you told enough of it to keep me interested. I had a few family members of the female persuasion that I remember fondly and regret my shyness at the time. Thanks for the trip down memory lane and the way I wish it had been. 5 stars
I have to agree with Rawmaster50...
The way you built up the characters I was looking forward to a lengthy, in depth story and was fairly disapointed when you ended it. But like he said, it's your story and I still gave it 5 stars. Great read and thanks for sharing!
Good story short ending
this was poised to be romantic blockbuster,the way u build yo characters was incredible,why did u have to end it?? was definately a good story,
Good story short ending
this was poised to be romantic blockbuster,the way u build yo characters was incredible,why did u have to end it?? was definately a good story,
Great story
Always enjoy reading your stories with an east Texas flavor!
Nicely done
I would have like to have read more of their lives, perhaps how they lived together and enjoyed each other bodies giving each other pleasure for many years.
Thanks for the read...
A Good Tale
well done, TR.
Excellent story...
Wonderfully written, romantic and erotic and pretty much flawless. I would love to read more, but it doesn't look like it's in the cards.
Did enjoy that !
A delicious story of finally requited passion.
5*
For some mysterious reason my character seems to have disappeared from the Literotica web site.
I am usually known as Oleguy.
Yes one delicious story. I almost want to beg for more but it probably is out of the question. Still a most delicious story.
so much unfulfilled promise
such an abrupt ending
have to agree with others
this is less than half a story, a GOOD writer would never leave it like this they would bring it to a PROPER ending. two more three page chapters would finish it nicely.
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