All Comments on '27 Minutes'

One of my favorite stories ever, because of the delving into the psyche behind the feelings and actions. The use of 'She' was spot on....it's exactly how I feel sometimes too. Almost taken over by another entity. Keep exploring that side in your writing, please.

Very hot sexy story, had me hard from beginning to end. Brought back fond memories of fingering French girlfriends in some very naughty places but never the Eurostar :-p

What an enjoyable read. I might be wrong but assume it was a pleasure to write also. Thanks for sharing.

one of my very favourite texts !!!!

Can't do better than this. More? If I say PLEASE?

Loved it. I doubt if you can top this masterpiece.

Absolutely wonderful story. Your vivid descriptions of Paris, the Metro, etc., are an engaging addition to the sheer eroticism. I appreciate the realism of your plot as well as the raw excitement of a wild, exhibitionist adventure. Can't wait for your next submission.

Fabulous hot hot hot and loved the subtle Disney twist you threw in

that i chose this piece to read, i mean! bloody hell! that was so hot...i want/need a man soooo bad right now its not funny. stop it! lmao wow. i have been to paris a few times, wasnt my fav city, but now if i go back i will look at it differently. not just because if the characters exhibitionism but because you painted the picture of paris so well to back it. tres jolie! < thats prob not exactly what i want to say lol

I read the story and got so hot that I insisted my lover read it too.

Wow!

I often apply a test to Exhibitionist stories: If the gender roles were reversed, would the story work?

If a man repeatedly exposed himself on a train, exposed himself to shop clerks, exposed himself, masturbated openly, and came in the center of a crowded metro car, etc. he would be in jail for a very long time even in France.

The story was very hot. This is just my plug for gender equality. Double standards swing both ways.

Led to your story by a forum post (http://forum.literotica.com/member.php?u=1630193) from A_Little_Show. Easy to see why it was so highly recommended. The hotel room scene though, in my opinion, was anti-climactic and could have been done off-stage. Still well worth a '5' and I will be reading more of your stories. Wow!

This is an absolute masterpiece, it will make me seriously think twice before giving five stars to any other stories I read.

The idea of exhibitionism on a crowded metro train is one I've played with before, although such endeavours have never resulted in a finished piece. I can now retire such ambitions, happy in the knowledge that such a story exists and of such a high quality.

What a exceptionally well written story. You managed to take me on a journey, through your detailed imaginings, that had me experiencing the whole drama as if it were my own. I thoroughly enjoyed the way you built the drama and could totally relate to the exquisite agony your characters were feeling. A well earned 5 stars from me.

I liked this story, both as a piece of writing, and also as erotica. Many stories here are very sexy, but this is very well written as well, I am envious of your writing.

My favorite part was the scene on the Metro which really turned me on, I don't often touch myself while reading stories, preferring the pleasures of arousal alone, but I did have to have a quick go for that scene, which I preferred to the final scene.

Thanks again.

The frenchman and his nearby wife, priceless. I thought I could feel her lack of aware ness, in the train, but her physical or emotional sensual ness rocked me as I was powerless to stop my voyeur, into her journey. Yes I loved your strory!!!

i have read some really bad erotica on here but this has got tobe the most well written and erotic ever. not only was the story great the way it drew you in was subtle and the erotica got me very very wet. thank you for a great story.xox

Wow. That's all I have to say. This story was so very sexy and well-written. 5 stars!

What makes this story all the more sexier is the author states in her bibliography that she writes from her diary plus my wife and I can relate to the story. When we first started going together I encouraged her to be an exhibitionist and she was reluctant at first but when she found out how exciting it was and how much it turned her on we looked for every opportunity to share our lust with others. GREAT writing !

Beautiful writing, strong and confident. I love the realistic detail, the second-by-second evocation of the sexual acts, the authentic settings, the sense of illicit thrill. Absolutely outstanding. Thank you.

Amazing imagery, very hot, and so well written. Arguably the best I've great here!

Way too wordy. It took more than 27 minutes to read it all.

Very well written!!

Had me writhing in my own private ecstasy...

Loved being able to envision each detail <3

This one got me going. Thank you for that!

I have been this girl. This girl is absolutely me. I've been in recovery and have felt ashamed for being this girl. But tonight, and after not having sex for a record time of r months, I needed to be reminded that it's okay to have fun every once in awhile... Seriously, haven't had such a strong orgasm in awhile.

Loved it!

This is for by Anonymous

11/26/15

This is my fantasy and reality...

I have been this girl. This girl is absolutely me. I've been in recovery and have felt ashamed for being this girl. But tonight, and after not having sex for a record time of r months, I needed to be reminded that it's okay to have fun every once in awhile... Seriously, haven't had such a strong orgasm in awhile.

Loved it!

You my dear...I would love to meet and have you as my partner to experience all you can dream of. In case you never ever read this, then if you are another single female then do write me...Souche cydonia1@cox.net

Do include a link to this story so I know what we are talking about. I am swm

Seeking such an adventurous lady. ;-) You are female don't think...write!!! ;-)))

Some of the best written, free from typos and grammatical errors, writing I have ever read online. And simply the best, most evocative, descriptions of both female and male arousal and orgasms EVER. Period!

You have a great way of filling the story with such detail. It took me back to Paris when I went with my husband. He did not make me come in the tube but did in the grass at the front of the Eiffel Tower. It was the best orgasm I have had.

This story was massively enhanced by the details, although sometimes my dirty mind wanted to FFWD through some of them! I can relate to this girl, she is definitely cut from the same cloth as me, although she has Done where I have only Daydreamed! I am also in lust with her Fellatingly-perfect partner. Yum! what girl doesn't want one of them. I shall be checking out other work by Bellefleure. (and thank you to the Lit member who recommended this to me!)

This is one of my go to stories when I need to get off. The fantasy of finishing in public while being watched by a willing stranger brings me over the edge.

Incredibly hot story! I may travel to Paris! On a train!

Bravo, bellefleure! I just came across this incredibly hot story years after it was written. I echo the praise of many other commenters. Delicious details. I love how the author puts us in the mind, body and soul of the woman on the train, getting inside not only her sex but her head to think and feel what she does.

I'd just add how much this story reminds me of one written a couple decades earlier, during a simpler time when people posted to newsgroups such as Alt.Sex.Stories: https://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Welsh_Dragon/Rdragon/Exhibition/paris_metro

It worked for me! Must get my wife to read this and see if it works for her as well. :-)

What skirts were made for.