All Comments on 'Hell's Gate Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Good girl gotta love a bad boy!

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 11 years ago
That's just mean

Cliffhangers, so good, but so, so evil. Good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
loved it

I have read all of this series they are great keep up the good work

St0rMiESt0rMiEalmost 11 years ago
Yet again...

Great story...love where it's heading but...

You *really* need to get the description of his height under control! She orgasms & her toes curl into the ground...next paragraph she's got her legs wrapped around his hips! He's seven foot tall...THINK ABOUT IT and get the descriptions right!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it.

Great story and great work. Such talent.Hope to read more of your creation soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Damn it!!

I actually got teary eyed!! Thanks alot!! Lol

I love this series!! It's nearly 3:30 in the morning but totally worth it!!

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