All Comments on 'The Maid'

Isn't it wonderful in fantasyland? I'll bet the maid asks for a raise.

HA

the story doesnt script as well when u know there is no maid

You were gone for over ten years from writing stories, welcome back ,if this a indication of what we can expect. That would be a wow from most of us. Thanks for this inspiring story.

Good story and lovely ending!

really nice story. the ending was totally unexpected. thank you. there really is nothing like having a truly loving wife.

Fun read and I sure didn't see the ending coming :-)

The first page/chapter was a drag. It surely perked up in number two. The spice was nice in three. Good reading. Cheers!

This one was truly unexpected!

. . . with that ending, which turned it from a hot read to a hot, fun read. Awesome!

This is the Best story I've read in a very long time!!!!!!!

Very well done. It was a 5 before the twist at the end.. and it became a 5.5 after.

Great work and a fun read!

This was a hot read!

I thought it was 5 stars even before the sexual stuff started. Excellently written. (I don't get to say that very often.)

Awesome story. Definetly a 10 on my erection scale !

One of the worst ! "1*" !!

The wrap up/epilogue was fantastic. The story written in good taste and kink without abandoning morals.

Smokepole

Nicely written, I loved it.

Thanks.

They some dum shit being passed off as stories around here.

I loved it.

I don't usually read this category because its usually full of cheating and cucks. But I took a chance on this one and enjoyed it, well done. Great ending with a loving relationship.

OK premise.

But all the sex is rushed.

Four stars.

Where is Carol at the end and where does she fit in? Seems the last couple sentences left me confused - 4.4*