I didn't rate it. I didn't know how. I really don't really know what I just read.
UNO ESTRELLA, MORON
I actually enjoyed your story and found it a refreshing change. Thanks for writing and sharing.
You suck dicks, this is garbage.
In answer to the one word crap the usual neanderthals have written, how about actually giving some reasons for your remarks, if they can be called such?
Was it well written? Yes. Good grammar, syntax, spelling? Yes. Twist in the tail? Yes. As to the story: defunct marriage? Yes. Wronged wife? Yes. Husband got what he deserved? Oh, yes! So where's the garbage but in the minds of the one word misogynistic critics?
on loving someone who is mentally deficient. This woman seemed complicated and interesting, but she seemed to have appalling taste in men. Sure, her hubby seemed like a real asshole, and you skillfully produced a marriage scenario that we would have no problem with you destroying through cheating. But I must say, it does get a little annoying, reading portraits of women who think they have a higher calling with their sex. They can heal a wounded man with their pussy! Interesting, that these women with this healing nurse mentality towards sex, are often consciously cheating on a marriage with no guilt, thinking that this sexual healing can somehow take precedence over marriage vows. And think NOTHING about the part of their life that they are destroying as a consequence of their actions. OK sure, in THIS story, Hubby has all ready broken the vows, and has become a first class asshole to the wife. But still, she should have held off on her mother Teresa hobby until the divorce was final. Funny that while she was trying to rationalize learning to love Norman's little quirks, she all but put it on a billboard for the reader, that what she REALLY loved was the big cock. So yet again, it comes down to penis size. That bit of shallow in her personality negates any of the other refinements you tried to present in her artistic character. I found Norman to be unsimpathetic, and he needed REAL therapy, not just some married neighbor pussy. But then again, for Norman, getting laid probably did work wonders for his self esteem. Who can say? May be there IS something to this "magic pussy" idea after all, but when two people find each other, they should be free of other or prior responsibilities before committing to each other. Interesting try with a woman's POV, but I still long to read about a woman that I would like to know. That seems to only happen with the female writers. I don't know why it just feels that way. Thanks for your efforts and good luck with future stories!
as i did enjoy the story but hate people like norman who has to have someone tell him what to do and can't deal with live.
and (even more importantly) so very a pleasant a story. I finished it with a smile. A "5" without a doubt. And thank you
I liked the story very much. It was a big change of pace, from these type of stories. I found it a very easy to read, and follow. Good luck, with future stories.
A rare story where I actually was happy for the cheating wife. It is enough to make one rethink their position on such issues. 5
This was an Odd Read, and I loved it! Expertly managed.
Don't usually like cheating fucking cunt stories but this one worked and I am a died in the wool BTB down kind of guy.
I didn't get it until near the end when it turned out that Hubby was cheating on Wifey all along, and she did him wrong in return. As cantbuymy said, I'm not usually one for cheating tales either, but Wifey in this one did some good with her cheating, and got her Asshole Hubby back for his cheating at the same time.
5 Stars and fairly original!
You brought the brain dead anonymous morons out in force. ( why do they hide their names, are they ashamed to put a name to such I'll- conceived comments).
Anyway, a well crafted tale about ordinary people. Well written and true to life.
Do not have double standard. I would have written they try kids..............
please write more *****
Just weird enough to be a damn good read!! Thanks for sharing.
... Norman is the Forest Gump of fucking. Panther Fan.
I always thought it was against the law to fuck retards.
Of course! They name their children Anonymous. Origional & well done
Within 6 months he had planned and then killed both Norman and his ex. Painfully. That's about what this mess deserves. A slow, painful death.
A character with simple honesty, who is unable to live any other way.
The world needs a lot more people like him.
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