All Comments on 'Innocence Lost'

who doesn't even know that the hymen is right at the entrance to the vagina. Not some way inside it.

One star for stupidity.

I understand the anatomy; I simply didn't write clearly enough - my bad. Easy enough to edit...a little less vitriol would appreciated!

Anonymous' comment was as follows:

"Another ignorant would-be writer

who doesn't even know that the hymen is right at the entrance to the vagina. Not some way inside it.

One star for stupidity."

I was about to make a comment to the same effect before I read Anonymous. It is a silly mistake, but not so great as to make this a one star production. I'm giving it a three as moderately good stroke, but no plot worthy of the name. The man had and used a condom, which added a certain reality to an otherwise well worn fantasy

dont listen to those losers i thought it was good

I loved it! Can we have another chapter.

I thoroughly enjoyed it! The only part that caused pause was when she had her "second" orgasm, I thought it was her third.

I hope you keep writing, this was good!

Condoms are for up the male ass only

Great story, 5 out of 5, I hope we'll see more of Carrie and Mr. Holbrook soon!

...And it was oh-so good. You made me feel as if I was in the room with them, watching like a starved animal craving for lust. Hell, I wanted be fucked by Mr. Holbrook after he was finished with Carrie!

5 stars indeed.

Purely brilliant.

Very nice.

Great read keep it up

I really appreciate he put a condom on actually, since she doesn't say she's on birth control for cramps or something. I know it's all fantasy but I often get thrown out of a story when they ignore basic safety. They're obviously both presumably clean so that's less of a concern here but there's nothing sexy about a baby at 18.

Neither character considers birth control or its omission, and that strikes a very false note about the whole fantasy - the closer fiction can stay to the truth the better

Otherwise a hot piece of writing

Kinda blew it - I was interrupted in my first reading of the story and missed the reference to the unopened box of condoms when I picked it (the story) up again

I love it