All Comments on 'Kissing Mum's Friend Goodnight Ch. 02'

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sailandoarsailandoarover 10 years ago
Masterful Job . . .

. . . of setting the scene with the first stirrings of sexual tension and then slowly building toward the climax.

Barkley570Barkley570over 10 years ago
What an Erotic Story

I certainly hope there will be an addition to these wonderful chapters. Soooo enjoyable.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
really erotic

esp. ch 2, and the way she makes him tell her how he finds her sexy-good writing well done thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Very nice. I also really hope you continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Omg

I could sense every second of the seduction. More more more please

katestylekatestyleover 7 years ago
Very erotic

Excellent story. 5 stars for you,

chytownchytownalmost 6 years ago
Great Well Written Story*****

Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

RegretsRegretsover 4 years ago
So glad that the old red fella finally made it.

I thought it was touch and go for quite a while. It seemed that one wrong word or intonation on his part could bring disaster. He should have drawn back the bedding and asked her to get in so that he could cuddle her and tell her the things she wanted to know.

I do hope that they set the alarm clock and then avoid hitting the snooze button.

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A bit more time on my hands these days, so trying to get back into writing after a break from it. Feedback welcome but please don't be offended if I don't enter into correspondence. I like to explore the pre-foreplay stage, how the sexual tension begins (and who by), whether ...