All Comments on 'Heat Wave'

There's a whole lot of good writing going on in this trio. You're a good writer and a good story teller. The first one was my favorite, which doesn't detract from the other two.

Well written and very erotic. I love the bantering between two old, dear friends. Very believable. I felt like I was right there...a silent observer. Loved it.

These short stories are incredibly well done, both with respect to the story line and the excellent writing. Each story is original and very sensual, without going over overboard. Lots of humor and likeable characters, nice ones.

A truly superb job. Each one is by itself totally successful.

Congratulations !

Thanks for writing and sharing them.

Thank you for 3 really decent stories. Cute, fun, fully described characters & completely makes you imagine you are right there watching! Exhibition at its best!! This trio of short stories, along with Roomates or more, are my favorites. Please write more of your believable stories. Part 2 or 3 of any or all, especially Roomates would do well with a couple more chapters!

I'm really enjoying all of your stories. You have a great writing style. Thanks for sharing.

A trio of separate, unconnected vignettes? Interesting concept for a CFNM piece. I think I enjoyed the third one best, as it seemed the most honest of the three tales: horny teen girls coax the hot guy into going naked for them; hot guy revels in showing off his big dick. Simple. Easy. Just wish you wouldn't have gone all Evil Orie on it and cut to the credits again just as my favorite character in the story, Heidi, shows up to join the party.

A damn frustrating place to end things.

I agree with IB, a frustrating place on all 3 of the stories. I can easily see each of these being their own full-fledged story. Hope it happens sometime.

most of the locals grew up going skinny dipping in the creeks when it got hot in the summer. We'd get stoned drink cold strawberry hill wine and one thing I remember > when there are a few girls together, they all get a little more daring and fun. Many wonderful memories of those times still seem exciting. I can't tell you cuz it would start another story ! Thanks .. Scotty

Wonderful stories — Thank you for sharing!

It is July and every day is over 100.

I saw the title of this story and had to read it.

Good work orie. This is a good summer story for these hot summer days.

Thank you.

I loved the format, different stories about a heat wave. And all of them good.

Well done just the right pace

Hot Hot Hot!

Great "short" stories, just enough to get the juices flowing.

Wow ! that was fun and very sexy,only their .behaviour was a little bit immature for their age, especially the girls. (I mean the cousin making out a hand job was like incest) They're meant to be in their 20s and they behaved like little virgins in their early teens. But all in all it was fun and I enjoyed it a lot. still 5 stars

Loved this collection- especially the Myra and Zac story which could go a lot further.

I am envious of all the guys being able to be in a CFNM situation with willing participants.

Keep up the great work.