All Comments on 'Mike and Megan Ch. 02'

you really need to keep this going . Love the new twist and looking forward to more of this new journey .

Please keep it going. I will be on pins and needles waiting for the next installment.

Let us know what happens to the aunt and uncle also.

This is a awesome story . Please continue .

I just read chapter 2 and I think you should wright at least one more chapter. But please don't take as long this time.

a wonderful story i like to see how it ends

looking for the next installment to resolve the Aunt & Uncle for what "should be left from parents will and property". Betty the owner is a nice side story

I have enjoyed this story need to find out what happned to their Aunt, hope she sent her husband to jail. Then need to get Inn owner and cleaning girl in to making a loveing freinship. Might include Aunt as she need to be away from husband.

i'm sorry but you can't stop there,

you've created more question than answers

like,

What happened to the uncle & aunt ?

Betty saying,funny they'd land here in our unassuming little den of sins.(need more on that)

will Betty confront them about being brother sister,

will they find out more about Betty and her past

what happens next, etc etc etc

What a let down. You said you were going to give some closure to this story, all you've done is to pique further interest.

There's nothing worse than a half finished story. Finish it or delete it.

Annoyed.

hey keep it going this is getting really good and I enjoyed the first 2 chapters

This chapter did expand a bit what happened in the 1st chapter, but instead of answering questions you created more. Please finish the story and give us closure to what will happen to Mike and Megan, and also find out the nature of the relationship between Gracie and Betty.

YES at least another chapter. Great writing Nora. THANK YOU!

Johnny

Beautiful story ... ended to soon.

This was a good story. The only two complaints about it are that Chapter One switched perspective without warning, and it ended too soon. What is the "Den of Sins" that the maid was referring to? I would love many more chapters of this story.

Just so damned annoying.........

Rapier

I think it's a good ending for a new beginning.

Has potential for more. The weird cuck vibe from him eating her creampie could have been left out but I suppose sometimes you do crazy things in the heat of passion.