All Comments on 'First Time with Neighbor Daddy Ch. 05'

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vez324vavez324vaover 10 years ago

Love the story. Hope the next chapter is out soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
LOVE IT

I loved it, now that we know Daddy likes women too, maybe he should slut out boy's mom too.

kisses

bobbi

buzzie1969buzzie1969over 10 years ago
leave the chicks out

I've been liking this story so far, very hot, but I'm gay.... I don't want to read anything about a chick......thought the surprise was going to be another guy he'd have to have sex with..... the chick was a turn off

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

One heck of a story / would love a 3sum like that any day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more please!!!!

This is the hottest storry I have ever read

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

Awesome chapter...I hope you add more chapters to this amazing story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
daddy

wow that is fucking hot, I hope mom joins in soon, I want him for my DADDY

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Daddy needs to fuck mom while Father fucks his own son;)

bills47bills47almost 10 years ago
dam

I really wish I was the boy there

bimalemarriedbimalemarriedover 9 years ago
best chapter of all

i'm still throbbing

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So hot

This series has made me cum numerous times!!

Pls remember to run spell check before submitting. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
its so hot

I came while reading this it reminded me of my neighbor who took my ass for my first gay sex. Since then I 've road a lot of cock need more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
so damn hot

I read thru the whole series,never touching my cock till I was done.at my age(55)being able to last that long without touching myself,is amazing.wouldn't mind being doubled team by the boy and Mr. Stanton.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great writing!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
stillwet

cock is stilll almost hard and sweet cum from fingers to my lips. lots of cum for me and wanting to suck a cock

peanispeanisalmost 9 years ago
Please add more

This series is just crying out for more episodes of it. I was really hoping that his mom and his dad as were the surprise. But I really really liked how you went with it. I hope that boy and slut start dating since they both would know of the others needs and then could be more available for their daddy's cock. Really hope that you come back to this series and add more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I agree with buzzie1969

This was a super hot story... until this chapter. Why did the author have to spoil it by bringing a young woman into it? If I think back to when I was in my late teens/early twenties as a cock hungry "twink" I would NOT have been impressed if one of my regular older male fuck buddies suddenly introduced a young woman into the action. No way I'd share a beautiful big cock with a woman! (Though it did turn me on once when a closet married middle-aged guy told me mid-fuck how much tighter I was than his wife's cunt, how it was so much more fun fucking me than her, how I sucked his cock better than her, etc.)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I love it

The whole series is incredibly hot. I made me wet ,it made me want to suck cock, it made me want to get my little ass fucked and fucked and fucked some more. Wow. It reminded me of the neighbor that started me sucking cock and then taking my virgin ass. I sucked his cock so many times and he fucked my tight little ass day after day. I loved being his little boy. He made me the cocksucker I am today and many men should thank him because I love sucking cock and getting my ass fucked thanks to him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it until...

This chapter was just a turn off for me. I enjoyed all the previous chapters though. So I gues kudos for you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hot

Loved the story, but less cock in ass to mouth, but please continue consider spell check

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great

These stories were great, just wish there was more to come

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 7 years ago
i enjoyed it all

I do hope this story gets more chapters, I liked the girl addition. different and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
awsome

really tin can erotica as in just what it says on the tin shame there's not more of it though 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
didn't care for it

loved 1-4 but not 5, sorry dude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Cock sucking

Didn't think it would been a girl was thinking mostly might been his dad naked and sucking each other off.

grandpax4grandpax4about 6 years ago
Cock suckin

Yes thought same thing . Thought it was going to be his dad naked like him and they both sucking and ducking each other

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ok wtf

It just got weird halfway through chapter 4. I liked your fantasy of a dominant neighbour Daddy figure along with the newly gay boy but it kinda got ruined from that point on. You did pretty nice for the previous chapters though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great then not

I loved chapters 1-4. Chapter five ruined the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ruined it

I genuinely didn't even read this chapter because I knew you were going to ruin it by adding a woman. Why is this in the gay section when it's a threesome with a woman? When I'm reading a gay story I expect it to be about men. And I'm a bloody woman. I genuinely hate it when authors feel the need to add extra people for no reason at all. No wonder you didn't continue on with these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great read

Nice job with your story, I really like all 5 chapters! Hot as fuck! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ending a let down

I was hoping for the Daddy's real son to be the surprise. Once you have become a cock lover a girl just does not do anything. Only one girl every gave a decent B.J. all the others were terrible. I never knew of any girl giving any tongue deep rim jobs. With a chapter longer story you could have got your boy's real parents addicted to the neighbor's cock and then had the whole family over for his pleasure. Having the neighbor's real son is my first choice for the ending. Sorry but over all it was a great story. In graduate school one of the best looking popular coeds wanted to go out with me, I thanked her but told her I had a girlfriend back home and we were engaged. I did not want to hurt her feelings. Only a few years sooner I would have been all over her. Life is funny sometimes.

moiyamoiyaover 5 years ago

1-4 were great... so I expected this to be a good continuation...sadly it wasnt... the minute the girl was introduced my high went down a little and for the first time I had to really concentrate to get it back up...

it was written well .and had this been a younger version of me I probably wouldve enjoyed it more... but sadly once you've been introduced to the wonders of mxm... hetero just doesn't do it for you anymore

MotherLover269MotherLover269over 5 years ago
hot hot hot

i thought all five chapters were good since i love women to so to me was incredible thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story...but...

we all have our twists and kinks...

I would have liked it much better had it stayed all male...

Mr. Stanton's son, brother or friend...or...the boy's own dad!

that would have been hot!

The dad could have been another dad for the boy...or could have been another boy for Mr. Stanton...yum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I grew up liking this chick i went to school with. If this ever had happened to be id want her as daddys slut. Good its a good series.

joeywhorejoeywhoreabout 5 years ago

This is really hot I hope you update again really soon and the parents eventually catch them in the act maybe video tape it you know like their own porno

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
A Real Sissy Boi

Oh, my! I so want to be a sissy boi like this! I want to behave, and be such a good girl, for both of them! What a new, sexual experience. I want Daddy to love me, an Mommy to love me too. I will be ever so good for both of them. I will be a very proud sissy boi all around! May I, please?

Roxanne Lanyon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

If you're a bi guy there's nothing hotter than sucking dick in front of woman you're also fucking. I had this hot, kinky girlfriend when I was going to San Francisco State wy back when. I'd told her about the cruising grounds out at the Windmill in Golden Gate Park. She insisted I take her. She had her hair tucked up in a cap and wore jeans and a denim jacket. From a distance, she could pass for a guy. I stashed her behind some bushes near one of the alcoves in the thick shrubbery. I hung out in the alcove, making sure I was easily seen from the main trail. It didn't take long for a guy to look in and stop. We went through the motions of rubbing our crotches, first discretely, then openly. I showed him mine, he showed me his and in a few moments we got together in a spot out of sight of the trail but close to where my girlfriend loitered. He grabbed mine and I grabbed his, we stroked for a little, then he leaned over and took my dick in his mouth. It felt great, I looked over to where I knew my girlfriend was grinning. Then, when I got close to cumming, I surprised myself by taking my turn sucking his cock. I'd been surprised at how big it was when I'd first grabbed it. Almost as big as mine. You don't see many of those and I didn't want to miss out. Another surprise was that he came pretty quickly and that I really enjoyed getting my mouth filled with his cum. (I got to admit, I spit it out. i've never gotten into swallowing. After this, my girlfriend and I went back to my apartment and got nasty with each other for the rest of the night. She thought it was hot to make out with me with the last vestiges of some stranger's cum in mouth.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 4 years ago
Just as hot as the other chapters

I'm addicted to good sex, so am happy for anyone to join me for uninhibited, full on raunchy sex. This chapter was a great addition so don't take too much notice of the narrow minded

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 4 years ago
Oh My Daddy

I was sure it would be his Mother but this is better. What a beautiful love story this would be if the sluts were to become married and still serve Daddy. That would be about as sweet as anyone could ever wish for.

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 4 years ago
please continue

This chapter was hot -- some bi action. Will he get to suck on his mom's tits and lick her pussy? Will his mom suck his cock while he gets fucked by Daddy?

Please tell us more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Your first 4 chapters were pretty good reads. Chapter 5, to me, was not in the gay male category. On another topic, there are many words in the English language that sound the same but are spelled differently and have completely different meanings. It would improve your stories if you had someone edit your writing and catch these wrong words. Spell check wouldn't work because the words you use are spelled correctly, they are just not the right words. One glaring example - bread should have been bred.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sxcret

First 4 chapters were golden but 5 just though me completely off 😑

DorcDorcalmost 4 years ago
Really hot series

Great relationship and how it evolved... LOVE IT!

Don30250Don30250almost 4 years ago
made me O

This story made me o

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So Hot

OMG you have the amazing ability to reach right into my brain and write this kinky series that keeps me hard and ready for the next chapter i can't wait to see what happens next!! Will he play with his mom? Will daddy and slut Vanessa dress him up and whore him out? So many delicious possibilities

Kenya46402Kenya46402over 3 years ago
Yesss

Now this is what I'm talking about. Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
i came so hard

so fucking hot. please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hetero Sex is So Boring

I need a daddy like that, god I need it so much. The way you describe the interaction between daddy and son is beyond hot. Truly, I’ve never been so worked up or come so much. But chapter 5 was such a let down. Hetero sex is so boring and I can find it anywhere. I came here for mind-numbing man-to-man sex. Please, please rewrite this chapter with nothing but cocks. Cocks are what I dream about. Cocks are what I live for. Just writing about cocks made me leak presume. Gotta go and pump my dick now. God I’m so aroused!

AleclovesAleclovesabout 3 years ago

Wouldn’t that be fabulous to watch mmmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Made me Cum loads!. Write more please. You make me stay hard.

rbell42rbell42almost 3 years ago

Great story. So many more possibilities, like involving the boy's mom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I was hoping his real dad was going to be there for fun.

Masters_SlavesMasters_Slavesalmost 3 years ago

We all need more please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue

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badbluebadblueover 2 years ago

Super hot! I’d also like to see his real mom and dad brought into the mix. And maybe Daddy’s real son as well.

rushman1ukrushman1ukover 2 years ago

Maybe his parents or at least one of them could be involved. Would be nice if he dressed in his mom's undies and heels for Daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love your story keep them coming

lov2pleasulov2pleasualmost 2 years ago

LOVED ALL 5 STORIES I THOUGHT U WOULD HVE THE BOY FUCK THE GIRL N SHE GWTS PREGNANT

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked previous ones this was shit

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I liked this chapter but can see why some might have been upset. I was hoping for another guy like many of the others who r

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I liked the chapter but can see why others are upset. I personally was hoping for Mr. Stanton's boss or dad or son to join the party. Since this story had a girl in it maybe group sex would have been a better category for it.

lizzeelizzeeover 1 year ago

Not a girl! His Dad or another guy

Sassybutterfly99Sassybutterfly99over 1 year ago

Please more !!!!! I love this

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ugh. No. Keep vagina out of the equation. Gross.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Can we get a prequel story going of the seduction of Vanessa?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is a fantasy I've always dreamed of, super hot to read! Can't wait for more!

SpurblackSpurblack7 months ago

Brilliant I love being dominated.

ZedDead1969ZedDead19697 months ago

Great series 👏 😊

WoodwiseWoodwise4 months ago

loved how this happened

1reddawg121reddawg124 months ago

Absolutely Brilliant Writing, Thew us a Curve ball with His Slut..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Pretty hot!

I been hard as a rock, playing with a dildo. Tasting my own saved up cum. I came so hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

One of my favorite things is to be fucked in the ass while I'm sucking black cock and my wife sucking my cock while I'm fingering her and then all cocks involved just cumming all over my face umm ummm 🔥🔥 Larry

sissylouise06sissylouise0621 days ago

...hmmm, stunningly exciting story <3

...first, I thought Mr Stanton would brought Matt blindfolded in front of his mom or dad, whom he submitted, but that little slut of Vanessa is a great panacea ;-)

...who knows, maybe Mr Stanton will find a subterfuge to make that slutty mommy his pet and later that of his own perverted son

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