by DBs_Bro
Loving the story but waiting sooo long and then getting only a short chapter is just cruel! LOL
Keep it going and please a little longer next time or less time between chapters...
Regards
Mr Wolf
thank you to both of you for another great chapter :-) ....... and as for the color blindness, there are also different types of color blindness, some people only have problems with some colors but are fine with other colors
http://colorvisiontesting.com/color2.htm
this site gives the actualities on colorblind conditions affecting certain individuals. I would assume that "lyden" is a deutoronomaly or a protonomaly. i.e. he can still see the colors but has a hard time identifying the different hues as the colors get closer together such as yellow-green or green-blue.
Loved it! Keep writing. I don't even care if it is scientifically accurate because the story is that fucking amazing.
I am also colourblind, I can only see primary colours (and grey white and black)
I find myself, like others here, waiting anxiously for the next installment of this story; only to read it and discover that I'm left with another cliff hanger! You really have mastered this tale and thanks to you also Garbonzo (no one remembers the editor but the writer)!
I'm hooked...
each eyes a different color blindness ones red blue and blue green. awesome story waiting for the next chapter
I love your story and if I had to wait on you to add new chapters I would be mad at the cliff hanger love how you have progressed with the characters and see the car going to get the Sucabuse
well then, the main charakter is still stupid as hell. Get the kid back to school and slap him everyday until he learns to use his brain. Surroundet by enemies turning into an weakened dragon and then just back in all public - oh yeah, very thoughtful. The story itself got some great elements but the super-stupid idiot drops the story to "leave it, it woun't get better". So, bye bye. I've read enough.