All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Ch. 26'

by DBs_Bro

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Mr WolfMr Wolfover 10 years ago
This is Cruel!!!

Loving the story but waiting sooo long and then getting only a short chapter is just cruel! LOL

Keep it going and please a little longer next time or less time between chapters...

Regards

Mr Wolf

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
another great chapter :-)

thank you to both of you for another great chapter :-) ....... and as for the color blindness, there are also different types of color blindness, some people only have problems with some colors but are fine with other colors

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
On the Topic of Colorblindness

http://colorvisiontesting.com/color2.htm

this site gives the actualities on colorblind conditions affecting certain individuals. I would assume that "lyden" is a deutoronomaly or a protonomaly. i.e. he can still see the colors but has a hard time identifying the different hues as the colors get closer together such as yellow-green or green-blue.

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusover 10 years ago

Loved it! Keep writing. I don't even care if it is scientifically accurate because the story is that fucking amazing.

technowildytechnowildyover 10 years ago

I am also colourblind, I can only see primary colours (and grey white and black)

OneIBlindOneIBlindover 10 years ago
You're such a tease!!!

I find myself, like others here, waiting anxiously for the next installment of this story; only to read it and discover that I'm left with another cliff hanger! You really have mastered this tale and thanks to you also Garbonzo (no one remembers the editor but the writer)!

I'm hooked...

Littlecat76Littlecat76over 10 years ago

Thanks for the update can't wait to see how this plays out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
3;) me too

each eyes a different color blindness ones red blue and blue green. awesome story waiting for the next chapter

lonewolfalphalonewolfalphaover 8 years ago
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

I love your story and if I had to wait on you to add new chapters I would be mad at the cliff hanger love how you have progressed with the characters and see the car going to get the Sucabuse

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

well then, the main charakter is still stupid as hell. Get the kid back to school and slap him everyday until he learns to use his brain. Surroundet by enemies turning into an weakened dragon and then just back in all public - oh yeah, very thoughtful. The story itself got some great elements but the super-stupid idiot drops the story to "leave it, it woun't get better". So, bye bye. I've read enough.

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